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The No Good Late Nights

I could fall asleep There ahead of me lies a dreamscape An adventure to step into But I'm here Consciously wracking my brain My eyes are tired All of me is tired But my heart beats loudly Calling on me always To figure it out Maybe I can listen as I fall asleep The secret to contentment Hidden in the beat That I try to quell

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Deb M

Date: 4/5/2023 8:44:00 PM

Great poem D.D….Debx

Di11y Da11y
Date: 4/5/2023 10:41:00 PM

Thanks Deb

Paul Willason

Date: 4/5/2023 6:13:00 PM

No wonder you need rest, the creativity engine you possess seems to have only overdrive. Leaves wonderful poems in its tracks but sometines needs to refuel. Maybe this poem is the fuel gauge of the subconscious. Take care.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 4/5/2023 10:41:00 PM

Thanks Paul, I want to create my own snare drum of a well crafted poem but feel I just have flow of consciousness. I need to back up and learn the craft. Thank you for your kind words

Speaks Volumes

Date: 4/5/2023 5:27:00 PM

Maybe dear poet your beating heart is calling for sleep. Its a mystery for the reader to ponder, while the poet drifts off to dreamland. Well written Enjoyed

Di11y Da11y
Date: 4/5/2023 10:39:00 PM

I'm sure it was, I filled up my 10 with deletable poems so had no choice. Thanks Wen