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The Kitchens Sweet Aroma

Scent nurtured into colours and charm from the prepared dish spices and vegetables on eatables garnished with fish. Air so sweetly processed causing hand stretching from nearby trees under the ceiling of the nostrils, senses scatter under this tease. Visitors walking by, longing to stick to its door’s edge beating the drums of instincts, the lords of hunger violently emerge. From the instructors of smell to the salivary shooters, short is the cable the icing of such anticipation, the mouth and teeth will enable. Beautiful wonder from the emission of gases inhaled without strain traveling into nearby consciousnesses, using a smooth train. Ingredients of an expensive sight but their mixture is the main gentle rising steam void of smell puts all effort in vain. Enticing transmitters from gases to bring about the brain’s involvement the wetness of feeding passageway, it’s about to implement. Food in its final stages of processing, getting ready the crown red and yellow stimulate appetite, awaiting satisfaction in brown. Sensation spreading from the nose to make the stomach blush as interior bowels wait and anticipate in a rush. Causing the sanitation and readiness of a prospective inner floor when this food is beyond the reach of hope, expect an intrinsic war.

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Date: 5/18/2016 1:12:00 PM
You just described what brings everyone into the kitchen to cook and to eat... A wonderful set of couplets and so rich in their detail. Great writing, Funom!
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Date: 5/16/2016 4:45:00 PM
Oh my goodness you are quite the gastronome, Funom! I enjoyed this excellent piece immensely as my stomach got very excited just reading your words. I am reaching for a snack as I give you a sweet lemon merangue pie 7! Pandita
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Date: 5/16/2016 11:28:00 AM
Wow, Funom ... that must have been some hunger you were feeling. I don't believe I've ever had it described so eloquently ... "Sensation spreading from the nose to make the stomach blush" ... my stomach is blushing as we speak, even though I just ate. Great creativity here ... I enjoyed it a lot.
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Date: 5/16/2016 2:28:00 AM
you described hunger so poetically beautiful, lol loved it:).....SKAT
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Date: 5/16/2016 9:06:00 AM
hahahaha! Thank you for that lovely descriptive compliment.
Date: 5/14/2016 4:42:00 PM
Okay, now I'm starving and it is well past lunch. This was a treat and you put us there in the kitchen with the sounds and smells. The couplet format worked well here. Good one!
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Funom Makama
Date: 5/16/2016 9:05:00 AM
Thank you so much for stopping by, I really appreciate it.
Date: 5/13/2016 11:38:00 AM
The kitchen being my main hangout, I enjoyed this one. You manage to stimulate all the senses nicely. Love, daver
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Date: 5/16/2016 9:05:00 AM
Thank you so much for stopping by, I really appreciate it.
Date: 5/12/2016 8:18:00 PM
very original work, Funom. So creative!
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Date: 5/16/2016 9:04:00 AM
Thank you so much for stopping by, I really appreciate it.
Date: 5/12/2016 5:29:00 PM
Interesting work..I was wondering if you consumed the same dish that I did yesterday that has me feeling nauseated today..Thanks for stopping by and reading my work...Sara
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Date: 5/16/2016 9:04:00 AM
Thank you so much for stopping by, I really appreciate it.
Date: 5/12/2016 3:28:00 PM
Oh my you followed the whole alimentary canal! It made me smile! Light & Love and as always thanks for stopping by!
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Date: 5/16/2016 9:03:00 AM
Thank you so much for stopping by, I really appreciate it.
Date: 5/12/2016 1:24:00 AM
Hello Funom ... and nice spicey through mealtime Funom - thank you - Lindsay
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Date: 5/16/2016 9:02:00 AM
Thank you so much for stopping by, I really appreciate it.
Date: 5/11/2016 8:57:00 PM
Ok!!!..So what time is dinner? :-) There's nothing like the aroma of good cooking! This is a right on write on!
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Date: 5/16/2016 9:02:00 AM
Thank you so much for stopping by, I really appreciate it.
Date: 5/11/2016 6:40:00 PM
Brilliantly written... nice couplets....
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Date: 5/16/2016 9:02:00 AM
Thank you so much for stopping by, I really appreciate it.
Date: 5/11/2016 2:18:00 PM
- The house heart .... peacefully room :) - Great written, Funom - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/16/2016 9:01:00 AM
Thank you so much for stopping by, I really appreciate it.

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