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The Fantasy of Loss

Inside the shadows where the chilling winds sigh, My IMAGINATION weaves a fading face— A ghost I conjure beneath the ashen sky, Gone with the DREAM no morning could dare replace. A silken REVERIE that is soft and stark, Consumes the bright light your laughter used to give. Now silence blooms where WHIMSY embraced the dark, And life's memories decide the way I live. A HALLUCINATION speaks your name once more, In whispers only midnight dares to hold. A VISUALIZATION coupled with lore— You haunt my deep wounds, my hours, my bed grown cold. Yet still I beg this heartache to never flee, For grief is a door to where you wait for me.

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Date: 6/16/2025 4:20:00 PM
sometimes grief makes one feel so real...in a weird sort of way. Particularly liked the next to the last stanza. yellow rose
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Bernard F. Asuncion
Date: 6/16/2025 7:52:00 PM
Thank you, Yellow Rose for your kind words. They truly inspire me.

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