Get Your Premium Membership

The Dream of a Lonely Orphan

She sat alone
behind closed window,
secured by iron grids,
on the top floor 
of an ugly old black building
that some dared call 
an orphanage.
 
Once she had hope,
Once she had dreams
that some kindly couple 
might perceive,
wish her for themselves,
take her to a cozy house,
where food was savoury to taste.
 
She dreamt she would 
achieve normality,
attend a proper school,
read books and play
with happy children,
receive toys occasionally,
and live in harmony.
 
The dream remained a dream.
days turned forlorn.
All hope was lost.
She was too old now.
Couples wanted small children,
Unsuitable ones came for her
but were refused.
 
Little did she know
that soon she would
develop another dream, 
that someone would finally notice her,
and carry her off
on a romantic spree.
From the closed barred window
She looked at the moon.
Will she find happiness?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




Post Comments
Please Login to post a comment
Date: 2/16/2019 12:45:00 PM
Hi Victor, Good perspective on someone that was left abandoned. Many blame parents for abandoning their child, but what if the parent thought they was giving their child a better life? However, like you skilfully wrote, that's not always the case. Poor girl, went from a child to young women and she's left all alone! Good storytelling. Well done:-) Alexis
Login to Reply
Date: 2/15/2019 10:10:00 PM
Of course she will. But she has to help herself. Mere dreaming won't do. I enjoyed your theme and your free verse.
Login to Reply
Date: 2/14/2019 12:45:00 AM
I've often pondered on this....it's heart-wrenching to see the face of unlucky children who are not chosen...it makes me angry on parents who abandon children while they are alive.. it's so unjust. Your writing brings all the confliction emotions to surface. Hope there is a remedy to it. May be severe punishment to those who abandon kids. Thanks for sharing. :) Sunita.
Login to Reply
Date: 2/13/2019 8:54:00 PM
No child should go through this, the world is unfair. Great write Victor.
Login to Reply
Date: 2/13/2019 8:34:00 PM
So nicely depicted the very hard sides of our life, Victor! Great!
Login to Reply
Date: 2/13/2019 6:44:00 AM
Who knows what wonders hide in the heart? Oh, this is poignant and pulls at the feelings and awakens us to a difficult reality! Well Done!
Login to Reply
Date: 2/13/2019 1:19:00 AM
Oh, I hope she does find happiness, Victor. Those older children have often waited many disappointing years for adoption. I would gladly welcome one into my home. She is still young, still needs love. Maybe the right man will come along and show her the love she deserves. Beautifully penned, Victor. Hugs, carolyn
Login to Reply
Date: 2/12/2019 9:56:00 PM
Enjoyed, Victor, well written ....
Login to Reply
Date: 2/12/2019 7:27:00 PM
Nice write Victor. It is so sad to know that some children are so lost with no hope. God bless them all and help them to have a wonderful life that all children deserve...I enjoyed your poem, my friend....Peter
Login to Reply
Date: 2/12/2019 3:22:00 PM
Best friend was an orphan, now married with grandchildren - there is always hope
Login to Reply
Date: 2/12/2019 2:25:00 PM
so close to my heart, this spectacular though pensive write... i volunteer as a counselor for orphanages, victor, and you moved me so!...huggs
Login to Reply
Date: 2/12/2019 11:33:00 AM
Sitting there waiting...NO...life's meant for getting...Nice write V...
Login to Reply
Date: 2/12/2019 7:53:00 AM
People still dream and hope, sometimes to escape their reality..Nicely penned Victor..
Login to Reply
Date: 2/12/2019 7:43:00 AM
We all have dreams and hopes for the future, hope she eventually found her dream. Tom.
Login to Reply
Date: 2/12/2019 7:21:00 AM
This is really great! The two types of emotions feel very real..well written, Victor.
Login to Reply
Date: 2/12/2019 6:02:00 AM
A deep poetry, Victor.Beautiful narration.
Login to Reply
Date: 2/12/2019 5:56:00 AM
Victor, this feels so real, I have a feeling you either are empathetic beyond the beyond or you have met someone in this or a similar circumstance. I often think of the orphans, and I know many who live with parents, but are still orphans. It is terribly sad.
Login to Reply
Date: 2/12/2019 5:52:00 AM
A captivating poem anticipating happiness against all odds dear, Victor! Marvelously narrated my friend!
Login to Reply
Date: 2/12/2019 5:51:00 AM
Victor, dreams that so many children world wide have. We very often think about the foster children we had and wonder if their dreams came true. A thoughtful write my friend.
Login to Reply
Buhagiar Avatar
Victor Buhagiar
Date: 2/12/2019 12:13:00 PM
Thanks. Appreciate.
Date: 2/12/2019 1:13:00 AM
- A description with longings, dreams and feelings, Victor - Beautifully written :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply