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Walking to the nearby plaza with my grandmother and riding on the carousel was such a special occasion. When the carousel came into view, I rushed toward it and my favorite horse, Daisy—a prancing white, wooden horse with an English style saddle sitting atop a purple, lavender, and green blanket decorated with gold bells along the bottom. I handed my quarter to the operator. “I want to ride Daisy, please.” He opened the gate and hoisted me on top of Daisy’s saddle. I sat still and waited until the carousel slowly turned, then gently faster. I felt like a princess atop Daisy as she strutted up and down. There was something almost magical about feeling the gentle breeze tousling my hair; watching the bobbing animals; and listening to the sound of the whistling carousel music. Reach for the brass ring!” the operator yelled as Daisy and I passed under the wooden arm suspended above the riders that released small grabbable rings. Most rings were iron, but one or two were made of brass, redeemable for a repeat carousel ride. I was never able to actually grab an iron ring, let alone a brass one. I simply didn’t have the necessary dexterity and timing. Nonetheless, I yearned for a brass ring and never gave up trying to grab one. Oh, how I wish I could circle back to those simple, effortless days—days that seemed to go on forever. But life, like a carousel, is constantly in motion making it impossible to return to those days.
Ride, ride, ride the carousel.
Reach for the brass ring.
Never to finish but to begin again.
Life is a circular thing.

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Date: 8/27/2023 2:13:00 PM
You have such colorful memories, Sara, and you're prose poetry is so enjoyable to read. Thanks for sharing the things that you love, with us. Hugs, Bill
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/27/2023 4:19:00 PM
thanks for enjoying the read, dear Bill. I do seem to have an overwhelming number of memories at times, like the memories of you and I. Me :-)
Date: 8/22/2023 12:26:00 PM
The world spins too fast today for my liking but your enchanting piece brings with it a gentle sense of calm and is tinged with so many warm memories from the long hot summers of childhood Sara. I really enjoyed your prose. Did you know that most European and American carousels revolve anti-clockwise yet we Brits ride our "Gallopers" in a clockwise direction? Cheers - Gary
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/22/2023 1:13:00 PM
Thanks, Gary, for reading and commenting on my nostalgic poem. I agree. The world spins too fast for me as well. I yearn for calm, slow days. No, I wasn't aware of the difference between the revolving direction of "Gallopers" and the American carousel horses. Thanks for that. Have a great evening.
Date: 8/20/2023 6:13:00 PM
I love your poem that follows the story of 'Daisy and the Brass Ring.' So affectionate; such warm memories. Nostalgia at its best, Sara! Huzzah!
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/22/2023 1:11:00 PM
thanks for reading my poem and for commenting, Gershon. I do appreciate your doing so. Yes, riding Daisy is a wonderful, childhood memory.

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