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nature, Landscape, Moonlight, Winter, Snow, Mist, Fence, Evening, Trees ...

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The world rests in the night. Trees, mountains, fields, and faces are released from the prison of shape and the burden of exposure. Each thing creeps back into its own nature within the shelter of dark. Darkness is the ancient womb. Nighttime is womb time. The darkness absolves everything; the struggle for identity and impression falls away. We rest in the night.
Drown me in aesthetic! The darkness and the silence The waters in velvet blue Where it all makes sense. The glimmer of the moonlight The night owls on flight When the moon rises above its fullness gives life. The moon, shining bright The wind as it howls in the darkness A sense of peace in the absence of sunshine What a great way to escape worries and troubles. Let me sink in the beauty of it! The glamour of the muted soiree Where colors dance side by side In the blank space of the evening.

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Date: 11/17/2023 3:37:00 PM
This is so enchanting. Enjoyed it so much!
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/17/2023 3:47:00 PM
thanks, Paige. I appreciate you and your visits, Sara
Date: 11/17/2023 12:11:00 PM
Sara, I sink into the beauty of your words and images - "colors dance sing by side," "sense of peace in the absence of sunshine," the moon "its fullness gives life." Oh such beautiful tranquility. Indeed night makes a space for all of this to happen. I am so happy to have found this nocturnal treasure today! Have to admit I do love the night not for its darkness but for its dance of peace and invitation to curl up in its womb rest! So creative. Blessings to you. Happy Thanksgiving!
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/17/2023 3:47:00 PM
wow, what wonderful comments, Sam. I'm beyond grateful for your complimentary words! I'm also glad you appreciate the nighttime as I do. It does offer up peace, like curling up in a womb. I'm grateful for your support and continued visits. Your words made my evening. Thank you, Sara
Date: 11/17/2023 8:12:00 AM
How beautiful is this, the way you weave words always leave me in awe, captivated by the imagery you paint in such a delicate and eloquent manner. Sometimes i feel like in darkness we see the most beautiful things, we see stars and moon all that which shows us light when all is but dark, one of my friend (fadingstar) said the other day to me that darkness is the real key to light, as in darkness we find faith etc. i can see those velvety waters and everything described here. A fave again.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/17/2023 8:30:00 AM
thanks, kind Ink, for your visit and your uplifting words. I agree, the darkness sheds so much 'light' on many things that might otherwise go unnoticed like faith, hope, etc. (I think you're friend is on to a big truth.) I'm glad you were to visual my poems imagery with your mind's eye. So cool. Thanks for the fav too. Enjoy your Friday, hugs, Sara
Date: 11/17/2023 5:48:00 AM
Dear Sara, you present a collection of outstanding topics articulately and skillfully. The smooth flow of lucid ideas demonstrates your great writing ability. This already beautiful poem is elevated to new heights of excellence by the fascinating imagery mixed with perfectly chosen words. Best wishes if it's for a contest
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/17/2023 8:31:00 AM
thank you, dear Sotto, for your visit and for your mindful and complimentary words--words that always mean a great deal to me. I didn't write this one for a contest, but perhaps I could at some point. Good idea. Have a blessed Friday & weekend, your poetess friend, Sara
Date: 11/17/2023 4:59:00 AM
Fantastic! I was trying to conjure a similar idea but couldn't articulate for the butterflies contest. Wonderful concepts and well written - enjoyed!
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/17/2023 8:33:00 AM
thank you, Di11y, for your visit and for your enthusiastic words. I'm grateful for your support and consistent visits. Have a splendid Friday, Sara

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