The Big Red Train

my teecher liked my pikture of a train i drawed in skool she sed she liked it lots and lots and i was very glad i showd it to my best frend who then sed it woz so cool that i woz on a train one day and with my mum and dad and wen we started off the sun was hot and in the sky and i sat by a window on the train to see owtside i saw a man wave to me from a brige as we zoooomed by and then i saw a big feeld that lukd red and very wide and then i saw a red horse in that feeld wen we went slow he must have been so hot with that red coat along his bak and wen we stopped becuz the train was broke and cudnt go the horse had run away and maybe got onto the track we had to clime down from the train just like the pleeceman sed and he woz old and had bald hair but he woz nice and kind he told my dad that there was somethink on the lines ahed and then the peepul said we had to follow them behind and wen I drawed that pikture of that train next day at skool i did not draw the horse becuz i could not but i tried but i cullerd in the red stuff that i saw in a big pool underneath the brige were that man waved and jumped and died.