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Terror

dreary the night dawns spirits roam desolate streets abandon souls cry night black and looming a distant scream captivates escape now vanished the chill of autumn visible breath shriek madness shadows lurk the night

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Date: 5/23/2015 11:36:00 AM
that is deep
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Date: 9/12/2010 5:44:00 AM
Congrats to you on your well deserved win, Rick
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Date: 9/11/2010 10:07:00 AM
good one congrats on your win
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Date: 9/11/2010 12:11:00 AM
Congratulations Rick on your third place, Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/10/2010 11:48:00 PM
enjoyed this Rick, congrats, Harry
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Date: 9/10/2010 10:48:00 PM
Nicely done, Rick! A big congratulations to you. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 9/10/2010 8:30:00 PM
Congratulations on your big win in the contest. Charles
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Date: 9/10/2010 6:46:00 PM
Congrats on the third place win, Rick
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Date: 9/10/2010 6:11:00 PM
real terror in these three haiku, Rick! Congrats on your win! -- nikko :)
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Date: 9/10/2010 5:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's contest Rick. Love Carol
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Date: 9/10/2010 2:07:00 PM
Rick, Congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/10/2010 1:37:00 PM
Congrats Rick on your success in my Halloween Haiku contest... enjoyed your spooky entry... thankxxx for supporting my contests and for all your help.. I was able to finalize and breeze through the judging this time luv..
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Date: 9/10/2010 9:15:00 AM
Soup mail --
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Date: 9/8/2010 12:08:00 PM
Very descriptive of the tall tales of the season...Good job..Sara
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Date: 9/8/2010 1:01:00 AM
Terrific images of Halloween night, Rick -- sights, sounds and the sensation of touch from the chilly autumn air. Best wishes in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/6/2010 6:07:00 PM
Cool Haiku! Perfect entry for the contest, Rick.Good luck with this-already a winner. Peace, Audrey
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Date: 9/6/2010 12:56:00 PM
BOOOOOOH... is exactly true in this beauty Rick... appreciate and thankxxx for supporting my new contest luv.. and good luck... awesome..
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Date: 9/6/2010 12:43:00 PM
terror indeed, Rick! good luck in the contest! jimbo
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Date: 9/6/2010 12:22:00 PM
Great work Rick. God luck in the contest. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/6/2010 10:35:00 AM
love it, good luck in the contest, mine is awfully wimpy compared to this, I need to channel my inner Stephen King
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Date: 9/6/2010 10:21:00 AM
dreary the night dawns ... powerful use of the oxymoron, images and shadows intertwined. Good
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