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Tears From a Clown

Once again, he dresses himself with flour- powdered face, neck -ruffles, and over-sized shoes: all these for kids wiggling Barnum and Bailey shrieks. He juggles the coins flashes a silly mime, while thorny nails knead in the circus of a mind –- his lost son lying hours ago through the exit of a deathly night. Giggles flood a sea of throats where life is a carnival: a mask of lampoon, farce. No one knows of polka dot tears which hide inside this clown’s leaking, flooding eyes. And a crazed show must go on and on where the absurdity of life is again enacted. ------------- Written 2/13/2017 Screwed XVI Contest Sponsor: Rob Carmark Resubmitted 3/01/2017

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Date: 2/14/2017 1:15:00 PM
A piercing peek behind the smiling makeup. A masterpiece of a poem, Nette. A wonderful job of balancing/showing the skill and talent a clown possesses w/the flawed side when not performing. I love this poem. A 7 and a fave. Nice double combo for this poetic gem. Love and hugs, dear.
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Date: 2/13/2017 6:55:00 AM
Great sad write, nette. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 2/13/2017 6:27:00 AM
There is a certain sadness to clowns I believe, we never know what goes on behind the happy make up. Nicely done Nette
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Date: 2/13/2017 12:14:00 AM
This is creative and sad Nette. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 2/12/2017 11:30:00 PM
Wow! Life is a circus, a foolish game where man's isolation or devastation is ignored. Excellent poetry without having to expose the word ' absurd.'
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Date: 2/12/2017 11:01:00 PM
Veery well expressed nette...like in real life...the show must go on...GL...GOD BLESS...^WW^
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Date: 2/12/2017 10:40:00 PM
You have brilliantly expressed tragedy in comedy. A deep write I turned to and admired!
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Date: 2/12/2017 8:25:00 PM
A vivid image! How we all hide behind a mask, often sporting a clown! Nice one, Nette!
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Date: 2/12/2017 3:59:00 PM
Wow, so sad, you have expressed this so so well! :)
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Date: 2/12/2017 3:49:00 PM
I found the theme painfully sad and the title is perfect Nette but they paint on a smile and the show must go on:-( hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/12/2017 3:15:00 PM
- Words of truth, Nette - Powerfully with beautiful words - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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