Tapestries

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we are all tapestries---woven pieces of light, love, history, stars sewn with magic, music, words

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/28/2023 7:18:00 PM

Genius, Sara, pure genius. Carole King is surely very, very proud of you. ~ Mosaic Man

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/29/2023 5:15:00 AM

I appreciate your kind and supportive words, Gershon! Your comment about Carole King is clever. Funny, I actually thought of her as I gave this poem its title. Loved that album. Enjoy your Sunday, Sara

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/28/2023 2:19:00 PM

Dear Sara, Your skillful use of language and metaphors in this piece is captivating. It reminds me of the intricate art of weaving, where every word and phrase is carefully crafted together. Just like a tapestry, our lives are intricately woven and intertwined, creating a beautiful and complex mosaic. The combination of magic, music, and words in your writing adds an enchanting and mesmerizing touch. Well done, dear poet.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/28/2023 2:22:00 PM

thank you, kind Sotto, for your compliments and comments. You totally 'got' this poem and the overarching metaphor and message. I'm grateful for your words, words that encourage. Wishing you a pleasant evening, dear friend.

Silent One

Date: 10/28/2023 7:06:00 AM

Such a wonderful weaving of words and I love your use of metaphor here... indeed we are all tapestries... woven and weaved... magic, music and words... nice kimo dear poet.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/28/2023 9:13:00 AM

thank you for your uplifting and positive comments, Silent One. You're a dear poet friend. May you have a splendid Saturday, Sara

Ink Empress

Date: 10/28/2023 4:33:00 AM

I think you are poetry, seriously, how do you always write so effortlessly in such flawless flow, especially this kimo, i cant help but be in awe of the way you’ve written this. I agree, we are all tapestries, of scars history so much more. Sewn with music sometimes words and sometimes magic from within! Beautiful picture too!! Absolute pleasure reading this. Sending you light today and always

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/28/2023 4:46:00 AM

ahhhh....thank you, dear Ink. I don't know how I write some of what I write...just comes to me. I'm sometimes surprised. :-) I've always liked the notion of tapestries and what they symbolize to me. I'm grateful for your appreciation. May you also have a day filled with light. Sara