Synchronized Swimming

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Groups of birds and fish may harness fluid dynamics to keep just the ...

a large school of fish in unison each fish turns synchronized swimming

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Ink Empress

Date: 3/14/2024 6:50:00 AM

Its amazing how they swim together too, i find it so soothing to see. I love snorkeling for this reason and more. It gives me so much peace to see how they move about and live under the sea. Where everything is so quiet and so calming. I love the picture and how youv written this haiku. So well delivered, pleasure always readinv hour work. A fave this is for me

Bill Baker
Date: 3/14/2024 3:16:00 PM

Snorkeling has always been something I enjoy doing, Inky. It is so peaceful to watch nature. Thanks for the FAV and the visit. Love and Light to you ... Bill

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/14/2024 3:28:00 AM

Incredible observation. I had an aquarium and often admired the fish turning in unison. We should learn from them.

Bill Baker
Date: 3/14/2024 3:18:00 PM

I watched "Finding Nemo", with my grandkids, and the fish swimming in unison was one of the best parts. lol Thanks for the visit and comments, Victor. Have a pleasant day! Bill

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 3/13/2024 4:30:00 PM

outstanding Haiku, hubby! I find it amazing when fish turn in unison, like those fish we saw at the Arboretum....Enjoyed reading your poem today, hugs, Sara

Bill Baker
Date: 3/13/2024 6:27:00 PM

Thanks for reading and commenting on my poetry, Sara. Have a pleasant evening with your truelove! Hee hee.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 3/13/2024 9:33:00 AM

Isn’t it amazing how fish endeavour to swim together in unison. Beryl

Bill Baker
Date: 3/13/2024 3:40:00 PM

It is amazing to me. I love watching them quickly turn as if they were all tied together. Thanks for the comment, Beryl. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Lin Lane

Date: 3/13/2024 8:57:00 AM

We could learn a thing or ten from them since as humans, we're usually out of sync. lol Bill.

Bill Baker
Date: 3/13/2024 3:41:00 PM

Isn't that the truth. As with most things in nature, they're lessons to learn. Bill