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Surprise !

One day when it was wet and grey I filled a form and sent away Exotic mix the order said To brighten any garden bed I wrote a cheque, a large amount It left a hole on my account But John will get a nice surprise When my exotics win a prize At their arrival, on due date To plant them out I couldn’t wait Prepared the plot and fed the soil I didn’t want these bulbs to spoil I planted deep and planted wide I used a ruler for my guide I took great care and watered well I wonder if they’ll have a smell. Away from home, a week or two A friend of mine was feeling blue When I returned, there by the gate Stood husband John in merry state And spread before my startled eyes To MY amazement, MY surprise Arrayed within my perfect beds A thousand nodding snowdrop heads What happened to my brilliant show? Where did my bright exotics go? Did someone cheat me, playing tricks And swap these snowdrops for my mix? But as I pondered on my plight I felt a dawning of delight I knew this trick was meant to be And God was smiling down at me Contest ‘In search of the human mind’ by A Rambling Poet My assignment--- SURPRISE!

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Date: 9/11/2010 5:43:00 AM
The tricky mind! God's the trickiest LOL (if you have a book in print to sell, let me know the title in a comment section of a poem of mine? I'm posting where to buy them in a blog. I'm trying to get us some sales for the Holidays) Light & Love!
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Date: 5/3/2010 1:34:00 PM
I ejoyed this Maggie! Goes to my favs...Congratulations on your win in the contest! Enjoy your well deserved win...Love, Audrey
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Date: 5/2/2010 10:34:00 AM
What a lovely entry for the contest...it is no surprise it was a winner!! Congratulations, Margaret!! Love, Carrie
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Date: 5/2/2010 7:16:00 AM
What a lovely surprise.. we don't always get what we want but God knows best. Congratulations. Love, joyce
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Date: 5/1/2010 9:46:00 PM
Congrats and Cheers Margaret on your 2nd place winning poem in Constance's contest.. a perfect poem for your assignment... enjoy this speical win..luv.. from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 4/14/2010 11:46:00 AM
I like this one . Love the ending with a smile, good luck on the contest. P.D. was here
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Date: 4/11/2010 6:04:00 AM
What an uplifting poem--a reminder that we can find splendor in many things if we care to really look. Nice use of rhyme. Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing!!! Karen
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Date: 4/10/2010 10:21:00 PM
Hey, that WAS a surprise. You did well in her contest. And I just got mine done last night. I am not wild about it. Haven't even typed it up yet. I have no idea what constance will think!! anyway, the footles, yeah, they are great fun. Next time I have a lot of time to waste, when will THAT ever be?? I will have to think up more. That is all I got now, those three parts I posted last week! So it must be daytime down under now?? Luv, Andrea
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Date: 4/10/2010 12:03:00 AM
GOOD LUCK ON THE CONTEST, ENJOYED THE READ TONIGHT
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