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Surgical Words

May my words cut deeply into thy soul as a sharpened sword Loosening the impediments of fear and hate causing your discord May they like the shinning surgical blade make their incisions Removing all delusion and indecision Yet, also let them be as precise as a master surgeons work Clearing even those hidden elements as they lie in lurk Waiting to surprise and cause great demise With full effect causing great pain and loud cries But let my closing bring healing and peace As the comforting sigh you now release Let my words, now new seeds be For you to use eternally Let them nurture and encourage your life Helping to endure and overcome strife Knowing my love will always endure And always be there for you, for sure Words may be sharp, or be used to be kind It’s just a matter of which ones you find Every word I say traveling to thee Is meant to bring love and comfort from me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 8/30/2023 5:48:00 AM
But let my closing bring healing and peace As the comforting sigh you now release Let my words, now new seeds be For you to use eternally---awesome my friend. Your words resonate throughout soothing and comforting the beloved. A FAVE for the love filled vibes you convey.
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Bill Baker
Date: 8/30/2023 7:02:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay, for the comments and especially for the FAV, my friend. Have a great day! Bill

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