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Sunshine Became a Dreadful Time

~ ~ I poured her a glass of lovely Red Wine by the end of the night she'd be all mine as the evening progressed I liked her less and less for her true inner self began to shine ~ ~ A Francine Roberts Contest "Bottle Of Wine, ( Fruit On The Vine, When....) Written~ 6-17-2011

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Date: 6/18/2011 6:53:00 PM
That's the spirit Rick ,,.. I'll be waiting.. P.d.
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Date: 6/18/2011 6:26:00 PM
Rick , you got in.. The second part is simply for the ones who did not make the 20 spots.. Oi .. Olol , I did not think It was gonna go smooth.. Good luck in this one as well... Thanks,..p.d.
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Date: 6/18/2011 8:56:00 AM
well done
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Date: 6/17/2011 8:02:00 PM
wow, Rick.Usually guys talk about how a woman becomes more and more attractive with alcohol consumption. It's interesting to see the other side. It proves you have character too. I really enjoyed the direction you took with this entry!
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Date: 6/17/2011 6:53:00 PM
Sadly, this is so very true...I love wine..but it does tend to give the tongue free reighn...lol..well done. Winner! BG
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Date: 6/17/2011 6:19:00 PM
Toasted and Trashed
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