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Early morning. I stood on my porch slowly sipping a cup of tea while watching the sun rise over my neighborhood. The sunshine brings a glow to the foliage, to the grass, and to the blooms. It brings a warm lightness to the heads of the birds, a shine to their feathers of all colors. The sunshine, as dependable as the stars, comes at any time of year, illuminating summer meadows and alpine slopes all the same. That morning, the sunshine brings brilliance and warmth to everything it touches, reflecting a shimmer from the ends of my eyelashes and inviting my eyes to rest. The sunshine, as static as a photograph, is the energy of the world in one place or another at the same time. Yet, in the series of moments we call the passage of time, everything flows. Regardless of the season, sunshine is the way joy seeps into my skin, keeping my heart in ambient steady rhythm. I wish there was a word for the feeling it brings. How ‘bout calling it "sunjoy?"
sunlight saunters, it burns shadows to vivid hues flows in graceful swirls golden rays of sun warmth on my skin, in my soul today’s sweet embrace golden orb above, radiance, warmth, and hope bring, life’s source shining bright

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Date: 11/30/2023 7:51:00 PM
Such an enormity of vivid images Sara. Breathtaking, every phrase, every line. This is truly beautiful A favortite for sure.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 12/1/2023 4:26:00 AM
thank you, SV, for stopping by and for your uplifting comments. I'm grateful you found my poem beautiful...means a lot to me. Thanks, too, for the fav! May you have a splendid Friday, Sara
Date: 11/29/2023 7:37:00 PM
Those first three lines are burnt into my memory now, Sara. Remarkable images. ~ Imagery and Imagination, Gershon
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Date: 11/30/2023 5:11:00 AM
thank you, Gershon, for stopping by. I appreciate your complimentary words....hope your burns aren't too severe :-) smiles, enjoy your day, Sara
Date: 11/29/2023 3:43:00 PM
"sunlight saunters, it burns shadows vivid hues flows in graceful swirls" ...very lovely! Ah talk of sun, and Winter just begun! LOL :)
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/30/2023 5:12:00 AM
thanks, Paige, for visiting and for commenting on the loveliness of my poem. Yes, I suppose the 'winter' poems are arriving...winter's been on my mind a lot lately. Have a great day, Sara
Date: 11/29/2023 12:38:00 PM
Will swirl then twirl to unfurl.ewk
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/29/2023 4:45:00 PM
thanks for your visit today, James, and for commenting. Have a pleasant evening, Sara
Date: 11/29/2023 12:09:00 PM
radiant write just like the sun itself, well done Sara
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/29/2023 4:49:00 PM
thank you for your uplifting comments, Clive. I'm grateful for your visits...have a great evening, Sara
Date: 11/29/2023 11:59:00 AM
You write the best haibuns and seem to bring your life into poetic existence.. You must get easily inspired and then share piece of your life with us.. a lovely read and those haiku at the end are just brilliant, but you do these so well.. I said it before, you must have haiku for breakfast.. most of us have weetabix.. love your poem as always dear Sara..
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/29/2023 4:47:00 PM
thank you for your uplifting and encouraging comments. I think maybe I am easily inspired...I sometimes just live in my own little creative nook. Hmm...haikus for breakfast...that could be mighty tasty. I'll have to give that a try. I appreciate your humorous comment. Have a splendid evening, Sara PS Grateful for your consistent support,
Date: 11/29/2023 11:50:00 AM
This is a strong poem that warms the heart. We need sunjoy.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/29/2023 4:50:00 PM
aww...thanks, Hilda. I'm glad my poem warmed your heart....I needed sunjoy today myself. Have a pleasant evening, Sara
Date: 11/29/2023 11:13:00 AM
Sara, truly elegant (rare these days): word perfect, touching…here in KY this year, depressing. Light gray sky since 1 or 2 wks before Halloween…
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Date: 11/29/2023 4:48:00 PM
oh my, sorry to hear of your gray skies...I remember living in Indiana and those gray skies that loomed from October till February. My heart goes out to you. Thanks for stopping by. Grateful for you, hugs, Sara
Date: 11/29/2023 10:37:00 AM
This is absolutely stunning and so beautiful. Your haibuns are just my fave ever to read. The way your words flow makes them such soul warming poems to read. I really love the opening lines as well as the way you’ve named this ability to see sunshine amidst rain or shine is so creativ. Sunjoy is unique. I keep reading your haibuns hoping oneday i could try one like you do. This one is another fave. For me. Especially those haiku flow in golden swirls captivating readers heart. Loved it
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/29/2023 4:53:00 PM
dearest Ink--I appreciate your thoughtful words and enthusiasm about my Haibuns. My hubby says they're my forte. I'm glad you liked the word 'sunjoy'--the word just came to me while I was walking outside in the sunshine yesterday. I'm humbly grateful for you faving this one. You just make my day. Hope you have a splendid evening, hugs, Sara
Date: 11/29/2023 9:02:00 AM
This is a blessing to read , to enjoy the beauty of God's creation around us, Sunjoy. Sounds great : ). It brings life and joy : ). As the light of the spirit sent from God to raise up life and joy within us : )
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/29/2023 4:50:00 PM
thank you, Stephan, for stopping by. You're right...so much beauty to enjoy in nature, God's creation. Have a lovely evening, Sara
Date: 11/29/2023 7:38:00 AM
A wonderful Haibun on the sun Sara. Imagine having no sunshine in our lives, there’s no way we or anything on earth would survive. Blessings, Belle
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/29/2023 8:55:00 AM
thanks for the visit, Belle. I agree, without sunshine none of us would survive, yet so often we take sunshine for granted. Not me today...perfect sunny morning with a few wispy clouds. Have a blessed day, Sara
Date: 11/29/2023 6:38:00 AM
So very eloquent and stirring, Sara. The sun is such a multi-faceted orb, it gives life, and in droughts, takes life from the crops. But without the sun we couldn't survive. Bravo on a brilliant write. Hugs xxxx
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/29/2023 8:56:00 AM
oh thank you, kind Gina, for your feedback and for the 'bravo.' That enthusiasm lifted my heart this morning. Thank you & have a blessed day, hugs, Sara

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