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STROKE THE HEART, IGNITE THE FLAME

STROKE THE HEART, IGNITE THE FLAME I went on a heathered journey to his heart. So passionately anxious was I to depart. To his welcoming mountain cabin in the woods. I walked through the fresh snow, as best I could. Where a warm, welcoming, fireplace awaited me. Through the falling snow I could barely see. His most alluring shadow on a shade I did see. Only a few more steps, to be wrapped in those arms that winter, magnificently. The table was set with utter perfection. Quickly, I entered,nearly running in his direction. No time for useless chit-chat at all, now. The candles flickered our shadows on the wall, oh wow! Oh, night of passion’s amberness, truly divine, two magical lovers, intertwined. A kingdom of tenderness, when I was fully thine. 9-8-2021 *Please comment on something specific in the poem. I know it is romantic! PR

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Date: 9/10/2021 11:26:00 PM
Panagiota, 'Please comment' Okay, I'm game. "I went on a heathered journey to his heart. ~~ So passionately anxious was I to depart.' This was the part I found very pleasing. -Richard
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Date: 10/3/2021 7:47:00 AM
10/3...Thank you, thank you,Richard for fulfilling my request and being very specific. Generalities are great accknowledgements! Specificity takes more time and gives the poem a clue! I reread it and loved everyline! Pangie
Date: 9/10/2021 10:16:00 AM
The meeting of two happy souls, you painted a very passionate encounter, pure bliss. Tom
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Date: 9/14/2021 2:31:00 AM
9/14""'2:30" Golly Tom. caught under an avalanche of comments.i love your comment, Apologies ..on 9/10 and 9/11 I was watching documentaries on the Twin Towers all days, Sorry Panagiota
Date: 9/9/2021 7:46:00 PM
Ah, to be young again! I hear you...blessings!!
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Date: 9/9/2021 8:07:00 PM
Me, too! I guess the ladies here have taken leave of me. LOL. I find that not shocking. Never dedicate a poem to a woman. Three times I have done that. You and another male were happy. I think I learned my lesson. Men are cool? I am a woman but do not understand them. I think more like a man! Pangie Pangie