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The evening news lulls me into a nightmarish sleep. In the distance storm clouds are brewing. I hear the rolling thunder of division and dissonance. On the horizon I see lightning bolts igniting fiery hatred. The storm rolls in. Muscular columns of darkened clouds and densely pelting rain march in indomitable columns across the landscape shredding it under the weight of the storm. A deep-throated thunder seizes everything within its reach shaking it with invisible hands. I smell destruction. I see faces touched by desperation and hopelessness; their spirits crushed. I witness nation rising against nation, kingdom against kingdom. Cities turn to rubble. Bodies lay scattered about, the halo of violence lingering over the land. I’m told these things must happen. “There’s always another storm,” they say. “That’s the way the world works—snowstorms, rainstorms, firestorms, and war.” Some are fierce. Others are small, merely squalls and skirmishes. I awaken with a start. What if tomorrow vanishes in the storm? What if time stands still? And yesterday, if once we lost our way, blunder in the storm? Will we find yesterday again ahead of us where we thought tomorrow’s sun would rise? storm clouds are brewing. angry wind slows then changes. winds of change blowing.

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Date: 8/17/2023 5:05:00 AM
My friend, this to me is indeed a truly excellent poem. Your verses all had my rapt attention from beginning to end. Got say this is another fav for me as it is a stellar creation. A fav. God bless.
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Date: 8/15/2023 8:49:00 PM
Whoa what a profound and wise and beautiful haibun. I love the haiku at the end and also the imagery throughout and questioning, what if tomorrow vanishes in the storm. So many thoughts many do think too and feel. And life how it is always a different storm different time. So well written
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/16/2023 3:51:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by and reading my haibun. It was my first attempt so I appreciate your supportive and kind comments. You're right, life always brings us different storms. Have a great day, Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/15/2023 12:23:00 PM
A creative/wonderful write. I love your colorful picture. Have a great day writing away.............
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/15/2023 4:40:00 PM
thanks, Paula, for reading and commenting on my piece. I appreciate you. Hope you had a great day as well, Sara
Date: 8/15/2023 10:57:00 AM
Excellent Haibun Poetry, Sara. The photo atop was awesome. The story and Haiku were both engaging and well-written. Your imagery drew me right into the storm. Chilling, exciting and mysterious! Thanks for sharing. Bill
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/15/2023 4:41:00 PM
awww, thank you for your comments, Bill. I'm glad you were drawn into the poem and also that you found the poem mysterious. That was one of my goals. You nailed it. your eastside writing bear, Sara

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