Stiletto

Slithering slowly, Stalking its small, feeble prey, Snake is set to strike.

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Bonnie Lieschke

Date: 9/10/2023 7:02:00 PM

I really enjoyed reading this poem and I appreciate how you used the word feeble, I feel it really describes the size of the mouse compared to the snake. Good Job Jaiah! Keep at it!!!

Fire Bird
Date: 9/10/2023 7:06:00 PM

Strong but true words Bonnie! You are both awesome poets and have a bright future!!

Fire Bird

Date: 9/10/2023 1:36:00 AM

This poem is awesome because you can see this poem in 2 ways; a snake stalking its prey or a bully taking advantage of weaker or less brave people, I love this poem. -Phoe

Fire Bird
Date: 9/10/2023 6:27:00 PM

I love that about poetry to, it's an amazing way to express your emotions to! Keep it up Jaiah, you are and exceptional poet, your amazing!

Writing Muse
Date: 9/10/2023 2:37:00 PM

that's exactly why i love writing poetry! it's subjective and can contain more than one meaning, it was exactly my intention, glad you realised and glad you liked it! :)