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Stars across twilight sky traveling fast journeying swiftly caravan of meteors, shooting stars.

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Valsa George

Date: 11/28/2023 9:07:00 PM

Just beautiful, giving the thrill of watching a star strewn night sky. The image too is so captivating !

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/29/2023 4:49:00 AM

you're so kind, Valsa. I'm grateful for your visits and your thoughtful words. You're a poetic and soulful spirit. Enjoy your day, Sara

Bill Baker

Date: 11/28/2023 5:39:00 PM

Just spacey enough for me to enjoy your Ninette, Sara. Nice subject and a lot of movement in this one. Well done! Thanks for sharing your poetry with us, my truelove. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/29/2023 4:49:00 AM

awww, thank you hubby Bill. I appreciate your comments and your loving support, always, hugs, me

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/28/2023 4:44:00 PM

Dear Sara your Ninette is so soothing. And your words are adorning as bright as a shining star, suddenly shimmering in the sky and then receding away in an elegant manner. Great one

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/28/2023 5:16:00 PM

awww...thank you, dearest Sotto. I'm grateful you found my Ninette soothing and my words adorning. Your comments were meaningful to me and I hold them close to my heart letting them inspire me as I write. Thank you! your poetess friend in Texas

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

Date: 11/28/2023 4:33:00 PM

Loved your ninette, Sara. Very difficoult to write ninettes as you wrote this one. Awesome to be rememberedxxx

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/28/2023 5:17:00 PM

you are so kind with your comments. I'm glad you liked my Ninette...this is only the 2d one I've written. The form is growing on me. have a pleasant evening, Sara

Paige Hind

Date: 11/28/2023 2:39:00 PM

Lovely! I see the picture.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/28/2023 5:18:00 PM

thank you, Paige! enjoy your day, Sara

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 11/28/2023 8:34:00 AM

A brilliant Ninette, Sara. Your words were like the shooting star itself. Quickly appearing, a bright flash, and then softly disappearing. A fantastic read my friend.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/28/2023 8:39:00 AM

awww...thanks, Jerry, for your kind words and for comparing my ninette to a shooting star...your complimentary words will stay with me for sure. I appreciate your consistent encouragement and support. Have a fabulous Tuesday, Sara

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/28/2023 7:34:00 AM

Your "Stars" is a beautiful Ninette write/pretty picture. Have a blessed day writing away.................

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/28/2023 8:33:00 AM

thanks, sweet Paula, for your visit and complimentary words. Blessings, Sara

Ink Empress

Date: 11/28/2023 6:22:00 AM

Ah this made my heart and soul swell and full of nothing but the ethereal light emanating from your starlit ninette. You truly are so good with these forms. I love how your first and last words are same stars but because it flows so seamless it wasnt even that noticeable. Clever. Celestial lines throughout. My fave is “twilight sky traveling fast” wow! How clever of you! How do you come up with such lines? Seriously loveee this fave definitely for me. Sending you light always

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/28/2023 8:37:00 AM

wow, Ink! I humbly thank you for your kind and enthusiastic comments. Thanks for encouraging me to experiment with different forms and for noticing when I do. I don't know how I come up with such lines, words...sometime I think they're just given to me...I feel sort of like a conduit if that makes sense. Thank you for the fave and your soulfulness. Have a blessed day, Sara

Clive Culverhouse

Date: 11/28/2023 5:55:00 AM

unexpeted word - caravan - it made the poem stand out for me, nicely done Sara, a great ninette

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/28/2023 8:34:00 AM

thanks for your complimentary words. I appreciate you noticing the detail of my word choice. Thank you for your consistent visits and support. Have a pleasant day, Sara