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Stand your Ground, even as the world Falls apart

There is a fracture to my heart, oxygen deprived to my brain.
It just won't let me love again. 
Is this where I fool myself to believe, this is the fun part?

My system is in repair, It's not A-Okay.
I don't care what people say.
I will not become part of the jungle out there.

Maybe i'll shed a few more tears,
and as they evaporate into thin air with every care.

I remember that...

It was my decision to take the fall,
because even now, I want her to stand tall.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/11/2015 9:11:00 PM
Rizz.. Wow, you just joined the Soup and you're already a featured Soup Poet on their home page.. I'm impressed! Hey, send me a line when you get a chance.. Blessings! .. PS: thanks for commenting on my poem
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Date: 5/12/2015 2:40:00 AM
I find it ridiculous myself. I never thought anything would be good enough. I will dm you some time. Don't be impressed xD. Sorry i'm reaally bad with compliments. Have a fantastic week. Warm Regards, Raza
Date: 5/10/2015 10:26:00 AM
Rizz :) Congratulations on having your poem featured this Mothers Day. SKAT love
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Date: 5/12/2015 2:36:00 AM
Haha, thanks. So honoured you think my poem deserves to be featured. I'm not good at being complimented or thanked. But thank you very much. I'll try write better and cheerier poems. Still think you're being too kind to feature it, haha. Warm Regards, Raza
Date: 5/8/2015 4:12:00 PM
Hi Rizz.. powerful, well constructed write, my friend. Welcome to Poetry Soup, a great place to display your creative, artist works. It's also an ideal place to meet and be shaped by other poets. Comment on their works and they will comment on yours. Give any of the varied contest a try as well. I look forward to reading more good writes this month! Please take time to check me out, ok... PS.. If you have any questions about the Soup feel free to ask, just send me a Soup Mail. Talk soon!
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Date: 5/4/2015 3:29:00 PM
Rizz, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 5/4/2015 5:57:00 AM
Didn't expect such a warm reception. Thank you for all the great feedback and support guys :). I look forward to reading more of your poems!
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Date: 5/3/2015 7:26:00 PM
Rizz, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 5/2/2015 9:15:00 PM
How noble of you to take the fall for her. Hope things get better for you soon. Nice work.
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