Spring's Tease

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12/06/2023

There's a gentleness to each scented breeze and a warm caress in the Sun's embrace, revealing the telltale signs of Spring's tease. The ice melts as rivers slowly unfreeze, and as daffodils show their yellow face there's a gentleness to each scented breeze. Forecast by the weatherman's expertise a transition is about to take place, revealing the telltale signs of Spring's tease. A warm Chinook brings Winter to Her knees weaving snowflakes into patches of lace, there's a gentleness to each scented breeze. As Robin-red-breasts herald honeybees the snowmen disappear without a trace, revealing the telltale signs of Spring's tease. Anxieties finally start to ease as the blues depart at a quickened pace. Revealing the telltale signs of Spring's tease, there's a gentleness to each scented breeze.

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Ink Empress

Date: 12/8/2023 8:31:00 AM

Very well written villanelle dear Emile, always a pleasure reading your work. The gentleness and delicate flow of your lines here is impeccable, congratulations

Emile Pinet
Date: 12/8/2023 9:28:00 AM

Thank you, Ink Empress, as always I welcome and appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Silent One

Date: 12/7/2023 1:56:00 PM

Lovely poem Emile... Congratulations on your placement in the contest

Emile Pinet
Date: 12/8/2023 7:37:00 AM

Thank you, Silent One, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.