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spring haiku

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practice one... I'll try again to be less emotion more nature for contest

window swing open birdsong rewind requiem - take it from the top trilling so tuneful when destinies are mapped out - cradle to the grave birds ready themselves tweeting and a twittering ~ just as they should be I might give up...

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Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 4/1/2025 8:54:00 AM

Dear DD, Dear DD, So gentle yet wonderful reflection on life's rhythms and uncertainties. I just loved the interplay of birdsong and destiny, which evokes for me a bittersweet harmony filled with hope yet tinged with resignation. I like how your artistry captured the delicate beauty of nature while exploring deeper truths about existence. Spring Blessings, my Dear Friend, Daniel

Di11y Da11y
Date: 4/2/2025 1:04:00 AM

Thank you Daniel, haiku is a tricky form to pitch correctly. Thanks for your kind words

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/31/2025 12:47:00 PM

Along with enjoying birdsong, a melancholy time might find their sweet sweet song, quite sad. Hugs ~ Kim

Di11y Da11y
Date: 3/31/2025 1:03:00 PM

I'm just not a natural at writing about nature I think. I may try again and see if I can not end the next one with gloom :)

I Am Anaya

Date: 3/31/2025 12:04:00 PM

Dilly you have made spring dark and i want to sing along, with my American accent, soprano voice or alto who knows, hope you find the voice for the recital ~

Di11y Da11y
Date: 3/31/2025 12:12:00 PM

Ahh yes, on my other poem. I do have a few and it's very inspiring :) I didn't know you could sing? That would add to the drama :) I keep trying to write a nice nature poem but so far I've been defeated haha