spectacles

lakes become sheet ice ever greens are bejewelled same but different

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/29/2023 4:38:00 AM

Way to go with this winter winner in Tania's contest. Congratulations to you. Thank you for sharing it with us. Sara K

Di11y Da11y
Date: 12/29/2023 9:06:00 AM

Thanks Sara, appreciated

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/25/2023 11:48:00 AM

Nice picture, Dilly. Congrats and merry Christmas

Di11y Da11y
Date: 12/26/2023 1:25:00 AM

Thank you Andrea, hope you had a good Christmas also x

Tania Kitchin

Date: 12/24/2023 12:59:00 PM

Dilly, congratulations on your winning placement with your creative haiku!

Di11y Da11y
Date: 12/24/2023 1:00:00 PM

Many thanks Tania - always fun to give them a go x

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/24/2023 8:11:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Your "spectacles" is a creative/fun haiku write. Merry Christmas...........

Di11y Da11y
Date: 12/24/2023 1:00:00 PM

Thank you Paula, appreciated x

Bill Baker

Date: 12/13/2023 9:48:00 PM

Nice imagery for your Haiku, my friend. I like it! Bill

Di11y Da11y
Date: 12/14/2023 3:15:00 PM

Thank you, they can be so tricky if you want to say something that hasn't been said - feels like all the good words are already taken! Thanks for the support

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 12/12/2023 1:25:00 AM

The vision of a tree lined lake in winter was very pleasant. My husband took me past a sign saying "closed for winter", and the view of trees in deep snow was spectacular. This poem reminds me of that day.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 12/12/2023 2:56:00 PM

Sounds beautiful Hilda - glad I could be linked in with that pretty view x

Daniel Turner

Date: 12/11/2023 4:56:00 PM

Im hoping I don't see too many bejeweled evergreens. Thats never a good thing in the south. Cool haiku, DD:)

Daniel Turner
Date: 12/12/2023 3:12:00 PM

It means the electricity would go out because of fallen limbs. They get so heavy with ice they break and fall onto the powerlines.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 12/12/2023 2:56:00 PM

Ooh are they not trees everywhere? Alligator's?

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 12/11/2023 4:21:00 PM

a lovely Haiku, Di11y! Our 'spectacles' see different spectacles in the wintertime. Everything is the same but different. Well said. Have a splendid evening, Sara

Di11y Da11y
Date: 12/12/2023 2:54:00 PM

Thank you Sara, I love seeing how things are different in the changing seasons, thank you for your kind words x