Soul Dance

dance of words felt not heard when souls entwine and silence as sound, we swirl on cloud nine

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/20/2023 2:56:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great Tetractys poem in Ink Empress contest, D.D. :) - hugs

Di11y Da11y
Date: 11/20/2023 8:55:00 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise - glad you liked it x

Eve Roper

Date: 11/18/2023 9:55:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, DD, I like the words, silence as sound.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 11/18/2023 10:24:00 PM

Thanks Eve, if you are attuned into a silence it can be quite beautiful x

Susan Ashley

Date: 11/18/2023 8:57:00 AM

Dear DD, your poem is stunning! I adore your verse "silence as sound". What we find, feel and "hear" in the realm of silence can be revealing and enchanting. I seek this realm in my meditation. Congratulations for your win in Ink's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Di11y Da11y
Date: 11/18/2023 10:24:00 PM

Thank you Susan for your thoughtful feedback - there are some wonderful silences. I appreciate your kind words x

Speaks Volumes

Date: 11/18/2023 4:23:00 AM

Congrats my friend. Well done :)

Di11y Da11y
Date: 11/18/2023 4:28:00 AM

Thank you!

Ink Empress

Date: 11/18/2023 3:53:00 AM

Dear D.D, i love the way you’ve written this tetractys, the alliterations and how words dance etc in such a soul warming manner truly stood out for me. Beautiful Flow of words too, somethings are felt but not heard, and when souls entwine in silence its magical. Profound write, So much has been conveyed in few syllables. And your syllables are on point. Pleasure reading this. Congratulations on your well deserved win

Di11y Da11y
Date: 11/18/2023 4:04:00 AM

Thank you so much Ink, it was a pleasure to try the form and I wanted to create something with a feeling of waltzing in silence. Thank you for my placement, I'm delighted x

Speaks Volumes

Date: 11/7/2023 2:22:00 AM

Love it. Just perfect

Di11y Da11y
Date: 11/7/2023 2:28:00 AM

Thanks SV :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/6/2023 1:54:00 PM

A creative/fun write. I enjoyed reading it. Have a blessed day writing away.............

Di11y Da11y
Date: 11/6/2023 2:26:00 PM

Thank you Paula x

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/6/2023 1:31:00 PM

this is beautiful, Dilly Dally

Di11y Da11y
Date: 11/6/2023 2:26:00 PM

Thank you Andrea, I'm quite taken with the idea of what exists in silence, like the vibrations from music, felt and understood connection. Thank you for taking the time to comment x

Margarita Lillico

Date: 11/6/2023 11:17:00 AM

The power of cloud has been heard! Nicely done!!! I’m back from summer to poetic hibernation stage :)

Di11y Da11y
Date: 11/6/2023 11:37:00 AM

Nice to see you back - so to see you back in the contest winners again :)