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Something About Nothing

I swim and sink Cry and laugh Converse, unlearned, crash landing My mind it swirls Anxiety builds I hate I'm so demanding Close my eyes To wake up Surprised when I'm still standing

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Date: 8/30/2023 2:43:00 PM
I liked your poem!
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Date: 8/30/2023 2:47:00 PM
Thanks Paige, it was part of a 'don't think, just write' experiment. Seeing what turned up. Thank you for your kind words, always appreciated
Date: 8/29/2023 1:03:00 PM
Yep, I have been there a few times. One just has to say hell with the world and go on living. Life has the power to get better. A fine poem my friend. God bless.
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Date: 8/29/2023 3:17:00 PM
Thanks Robert
Date: 8/29/2023 10:30:00 AM
Amusing and clever. Well done D
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Date: 8/29/2023 10:49:00 AM
Thanks SV x
Date: 8/29/2023 7:58:00 AM
Nice, DD:)
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Date: 8/29/2023 8:01:00 AM
Thanks Jo x
Date: 8/29/2023 6:44:00 AM
I meant I enjoy the rhythm and pace of the poem. A nice slice of life.
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Date: 8/29/2023 8:00:00 AM
Thanks Mike
Date: 8/29/2023 6:43:00 AM
I enjoy the rhyme. Yes, we worry so much, and with so much going on in life, we can be surprised that we're still standing.
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