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Snack Attack

There once was a lad we all called him Mack To carry his snacks, he had a backpack While taking a snooze, His backpack he’d lose Somewhere, someone was enjoying a snack

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Valsa George

Date: 9/11/2022 8:32:00 PM

Poor Mack, though he did heap, all his snacks, snacked up by someone else. Beautiful limerick !

Bill Baker
Date: 9/12/2022 6:43:00 AM

Yep, should have just shared them. Then he would get some and have the joy of seeing another person enjoy some. Thanks for your comments on so many of my poems today, my dear friend. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Lisa Ricci

Date: 9/8/2022 5:16:00 AM

Good Morning Bill. Hello. Poor Mack. One can not turn their head for a second (smile). This was adorable and a fun way to start the day. Have a wonderful morning and day. Keep enjoying poetry and poetrysoup too. Blessings always.(smile) PS. I keep trying to execute a limerick but I somehow fail but I won't give up.

Bill Baker
Date: 9/8/2022 7:20:00 PM

You can do it, Lisa. Sometimes it's easier if you decide on the final line first. Have a fun day! Bill

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/17/2022 12:20:00 PM

What a fun/cute write. Thanks for the laugh. Kids with be kids. Have a great/blessed day......................

Bill Baker
Date: 7/17/2022 3:47:00 PM

Wrote it just for fun. :-) Bill

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 6/26/2022 12:49:00 PM

was re-reading some of your poems while eating my favorite snack :-)

Bill Baker
Date: 6/27/2022 7:26:00 AM

Enjoy them both, sweet tooth Sara! Hugs, Bill

Spirit Cook

Date: 6/24/2022 12:19:00 PM

guffaw!

Spirit Cook
Date: 6/25/2022 6:00:00 AM

;D I'm still chuckling. Be well, dearest Bill and don't stop the funnies.

Bill Baker
Date: 6/24/2022 3:57:00 PM

Your comment made me smile, thank you! Have a great day my friend. Bill

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/19/2022 6:54:00 AM

Bill, that was a delightful limerick! Thank you very much for making me chuckle.

Bill Baker
Date: 6/19/2022 10:20:00 AM

Your welcome. We need a few light ones from time to time. Bill

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/18/2022 4:11:00 PM

Love it. AT first I went brain dead and read the title as snake attack. haha

Bill Baker
Date: 6/19/2022 10:21:00 AM

Made me smile ... it could have been a snake? lol

Panagiota Romios

Date: 6/18/2022 11:51:00 AM

Enjoyable limerick, Bill! Thank you for the smile)))))) Panagiota xx

Bill Baker
Date: 6/19/2022 10:22:00 AM

Thank you my friend, for the uplifting comment. Have a great week, Bill

Miranda Hawley

Date: 6/18/2022 10:55:00 AM

That poem is cute.

Bill Baker
Date: 6/18/2022 11:51:00 AM

Good, I don't write many Limericks, but gave it a try. Smiles ~ Blessings, Miranda. Bill

Paghunda Zahid

Date: 6/15/2022 6:49:00 AM

Haha poor him.. Cute poem

Bill Baker
Date: 6/16/2022 1:01:00 PM

Thanks for the comment, Paghunda. Have a great day! Bill

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 6/13/2022 7:44:00 AM

Oh dear~good message for 'keeping one eye open"....LOL :)Paulette

Bill Baker
Date: 6/13/2022 12:22:00 PM

lol Good one, Paulette. Thanks for commenting! Hugs, Bill

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/12/2022 7:05:00 PM

When asleep, Mack was a 'dead give-a-way' for Santa Claus! Smiles, gw

Bill Baker
Date: 6/12/2022 7:09:00 PM

Made me laugh, Gershon, thanks. Bill

Deb M

Date: 6/12/2022 5:17:00 AM

Really cute poem Bill…..Debx

Bill Baker
Date: 6/12/2022 7:41:00 AM

Thanks, Deb. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 6/12/2022 3:17:00 AM

funny one, Bill. I carried my childhood snacks in a sack and to the park I went...to smack, smack, smack!

Bill Baker
Date: 6/12/2022 7:41:00 AM

Nice rhyme Sara. :-) Bill

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/12/2022 12:41:00 AM

HS ha ha good one my friend I nee ded that laugh perhaps Mark will look after his things more carefully and be more mindful inf fute HIowever I feel sorry for him hugs andblesses Jennifer.

Bill Baker
Date: 6/12/2022 7:43:00 AM

Thank you, Jennifer for reading and commenting on my poetry my friend. Hugs, Bill

L Milton Hankins

Date: 6/11/2022 7:30:00 PM

Ha! (chuckling) Funny, Bill. When I was a kid, sometimes I took mayonaisse sandwiches to school! So, if they took mine, they didn't get much. I remember even taking bisquit and jelly sandwiches. Yep!

Spirit Cook
Date: 6/24/2022 12:14:00 PM

When I was younger, on a night out, I used to drink gin and grapefruit. If anyone tried to take a sip the look on their face was priceless (note this back in a time when we were not panicing about date rape drugs)

Bill Baker
Date: 6/12/2022 7:40:00 AM

I got mustard sandwiches, sometimes with dill pickle slices. (Special days) One of my favorite memories is starting Jr High and getting to work in the cafeteria at school, bus the tables when kids left their trays on the tables. I got free lunch, all I wanted to eat. The cookies were great! lol Thanks for sharing your memories, Milt. Have a great day my friend. Bill