Skylight

Stars in the night I see Scenery so sightly Some are twinkling brightly Small ones showing lightly Staring at them nightly Structure holds some tightly Softly they delight me

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/26/2022 5:13:00 AM

Stars my fav. subject to write on and i could put a tune to this one - so absolutely a wonderful poem my friend Bill, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Bill Baker
Date: 5/26/2022 9:28:00 PM

Thank you, Jennifer. It's always nice to see I have a comment from your pen. You make my day! Hugs, Bill

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/25/2022 10:10:00 AM

I like this style - it is jazzy!

Bill Baker
Date: 5/26/2022 9:27:00 PM

A little different, so I like it. :-)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/22/2022 5:41:00 PM

I like this one. Bounces along perfectly for me. ~ Quite rightly!

Bill Baker
Date: 5/23/2022 5:51:00 PM

I like it. Quite Rightly! Good response, Gershon. Bill

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/22/2022 10:54:00 AM

Bill, your "S" Pleiades poem conjures up wonderful ideas of celestial landscapes and objects.

Bill Baker
Date: 5/23/2022 5:52:00 PM

Thanks, my friend. Bill

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/22/2022 5:15:00 AM

Wonderful stellar images you convey through your "S" in this form, Bill.

Bill Baker
Date: 5/23/2022 5:52:00 PM

Thank you, Vijay. Just trying something different today. Bill

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 5/21/2022 5:37:00 PM

I love the night sky and your Pleiades is Star Studded! Delightful! :)Paulette

Bill Baker
Date: 5/21/2022 7:46:00 PM

Thanks for the comment, Paulette. Trying a few different forms. Smiles ~ Blessings, Bill

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 5/21/2022 5:11:00 PM

Starry, starry nights do delight as does your poetry tonight! :-) Seriously, I thought this poem was delightful and creatively crafted.

Bill Baker
Date: 5/21/2022 5:24:00 PM

Thank you, Sara. Have a nice weekend! Bill