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Sit and Wait Here

exits: figments of imagination when you are in the long night eyes burn, limbs ache, time snarls

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Paige Hind

Date: 10/23/2023 8:32:00 PM

A wonderful kimo! So much intensity...

Di11y Da11y
Date: 10/23/2023 11:11:00 PM

Thanks Paige - I think I'll adopt the word snarl to use again - it's got layers of power x

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/23/2023 4:29:00 AM

I've experienced the 'time snarl'--the long nights waiting. You created a powerful image in my mind. Nicely done! enjoy your day, Sara

Di11y Da11y
Date: 10/23/2023 5:06:00 AM

Thank you Sara, so kind of you to spend time with these three poems - I appreciate it. The time snarl nearly ate me up or causes me to be snappy. On the other side now, thanks for your comment x