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Simplistically Complex ( a Guiding Light )

Illuminating waters ebb thy spirit need Vast antiquity (Selah)Placed 11th Guiding Light /A Raul Moreno Contest

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Skat A

Date: 5/23/2015 11:52:00 AM

:):)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/23/2010 6:41:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's Guiding Light contest Rick. Love, Carol

John Freeman

Date: 4/22/2010 6:27:00 PM

Congratulations Rick on your fine poem's success in the contest. Agape, Moses

John Beam

Date: 4/22/2010 6:12:00 PM

nice write thanks for comment congrats to you also

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/22/2010 2:47:00 PM

Congrat..on your success ,, well merited ... and tnx for stopping by on my blog..Charma

Kim M

Date: 4/22/2010 2:27:00 PM

Congratulations, Rick. I want to reiterate my previously written appreciation for this enormously brilliant painting.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/22/2010 2:07:00 PM

Congrats Rick on your winning poem in Raul's contest... perfect words for the photo and a different view of illumination..luv.. "Sweetheart"

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/22/2010 12:54:00 PM

Rick, congratulations on your success in my contest...Raul

Margaret Foster

Date: 4/21/2010 11:27:00 PM

Hi Rick This is a beautiful haiku that compliments the picture perfectly,well done...cheers Margaret

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/21/2010 7:02:00 PM

This is truly a unique approach, Rick, and I like the reference to the "vast antiquity." Nice choice of words. You're doing some really fine work here, Rick. Love, Carolyn

Cecil Hickman

Date: 4/21/2010 6:39:00 PM

great words and interpretation,,best of luck in the contest,,and thank you for reading and commenting upon my words,,,Blessings..Cecil

Kim M

Date: 4/21/2010 6:07:00 PM

Oh! This is real poetry! The decaying ancient realm desperately needs the lively energy of the golden sun! The ebbing tide adds to the desolation. Very well done.

Skat A

Date: 4/21/2010 4:56:00 PM

Good luck in the contest, I have enjoyed the read today.