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Shore With Red House - Edvard Munch

Do you see the frame or the cage? Step beyond and into this: a rare and colourful bliss, island of calm in an ocean of rage... Yesterday, the thunderous sunder of schizoid storm. Today, this eden of balm where all's serene, though the outer pacifying sea can never douse the inner burning chambers of insanity's house; the splintered timber and cindered tinder, scarlet cinders of timbers that softly drift from land to sea like sweetening sails, to sea-smooth and soothe the bitter galls and silence the silent scream in me. Set me free, my Aasgardstrand, beloved watercolour water-town of pastel sand, prismatic land, pink-glinting pebbles and boulders. In green distance the heart-house smoulders lapped by lilt and lullaby of waves, tilt and tint of sea-lit scape that stills the sea of madness in my ear, its endless sibilant hiss... Never so much myself as when walking beside your redeeming shore, framed in littoral light, waves salving the fragile shell of my unheard heart, breezes soothing the screaming tempest of art; violet misted solace of sea and sky that cools the violent internal inferno house - the haze and the blaze of my saving art.

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Date: 9/16/2023 3:20:00 PM
Very interesting the why you expound on his mind, colors and etc. Magnificent imagery and depths explored in this new creation. Poem must be read several times to get its depths. That is artistry at it finest. A gem and a fav. God bless.
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Date: 7/19/2023 5:33:00 PM
Maybe it's a creative outlet for sufferers. Or it could be that the part of the brain impacted by clinical illness is the part responsible for creativity. Who knows really. Your wordplay is enviable, as always
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Date: 7/16/2023 3:18:00 AM
Why do artists and poets suffer from mental health problems? I wonder if the scream was his inner turmoil.
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Paul Bell
Date: 7/17/2023 5:39:00 AM
You stay tall. You're needed here to keep the flower people at bay.
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Charlotte Puddifoot
Date: 7/16/2023 2:28:00 PM
as a sufferer myself, it's a question i've often pondered
Date: 7/15/2023 1:52:00 AM
Lovely description here, Charlotte. So enjoyed reading it, and will visit it again!
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Date: 7/14/2023 7:04:00 PM
"the haze and the blaze of my saving art" - Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/13/2023 1:18:00 PM
A well written Ekphrasis, Charlotte, your descriptions and imagery bring the scenes to life. I enjoyed reading your poetry today, hope to read more another time. A poet in Texas, Bill
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Date: 7/13/2023 5:55:00 AM
Love the stream-of-consciousness writing. Love to follow the trail of well-chosen words on your poetic journey. Looking forward to more
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Date: 7/13/2023 4:32:00 AM
Wow. Thanks for this beautiful poem, Charlotte. It's so moving.
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Date: 7/12/2023 4:25:00 PM
Charlotte, you have done Edvard Munch proud with your poem. You have given the viewer more light and shade than was evident. The house, you have brought to the forefront where it was previously tucked away almost unnoticed. You added color to the sea scape and forced me to have interest in seeing his painting. Well done.
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Charlotte Puddifoot
Date: 7/14/2023 3:08:00 AM
the red house i use as metaphor for his mental illness..i prefer his landscapes to his paintings of people, and this one jumped out at me, the colours are so striking..i like it so much i've bought a print of it! :)

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