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we amble through the warm winds of summer's debris welcome summer's ghost

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 9/8/2023 4:29:00 PM

A wonderful Haiku that em embodies how fe feel about fall Fall…as summer’s ghost is terrific imagery. Very clear and universal! Thank tou, Pangie xx

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/8/2023 4:45:00 PM

thank you for stopping by....I appreciate you 'getting' what I was hoping to convey. wishing you a great weekend, Sara xx

Lisa Ricci

Date: 9/8/2023 3:11:00 PM

You are most welcome Sara. Your poetic skill is wonderful. (smile)

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/8/2023 4:44:00 PM

Your poetic prowess is equally wonderful. smiles back at you, Sara

Lisa Ricci

Date: 9/8/2023 3:58:00 AM

Good Morning Sara. Allow me just to say this is perfection in the haiku format and with the imagery you provide. Be proud of your execution. Truly. Thank you for sharing your poetic talent. Have a wonderful morning and weekend too. Peace and Blessings to you and Bill. (smile)

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/8/2023 8:14:00 AM

I truly don't know what to say. Your words about my poetry kind of stopped me in my tracks. Thank you. You're most kind. I just recently began seriously writing poetry and find I love it. I've always been a storyteller and memoir writer, but poetry, especially haiku, requires a simplicity I've come to appreciate and respect. Thanks for stopping by, Blessings

Ink Empress

Date: 9/5/2023 11:58:00 AM

Oh the queen of haikus, is back to bless us with a deep and profound once again. I love “ warm winds of summers debris” And “ summer’s ghost “ how creative and thoughtful are your words. Flows seamlessly too. Its always summer for me but i can imagine how it would be for you. I personally never likes septembers . As always its a pleasure reading you poetic soul

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/5/2023 12:44:00 PM

thank you for 'getting' my haiku and for appreciating 'summer's ghost.' Once upon a time, I enjoyed summer; now, though, I find the heat exhausting. Must be my age :-) September, October, May, and June are my favorite months. Anyway, I digress. Have a wonderful, poetic afternoon.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 9/5/2023 11:08:00 AM

This is so wonderfully creative, Sara! I love your word use and unique images. Thank you for this lovely haiku. Blessings.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/5/2023 12:38:00 PM

thank you, Sam, for stopping by and for commenting on my little creation. Blessings to you as well, Sara

Bill Baker

Date: 9/5/2023 9:34:00 AM

Nice Haiku, my eastside writing bear. I liked it! Hugs, Bill

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/5/2023 12:37:00 PM

thank you, my westside writing bear hugs back at you, me

Tom Woody

Date: 9/5/2023 8:40:00 AM

Sublime haiku Sara. Let's hope it's a friendly ghost

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/5/2023 12:37:00 PM

thanks for stopping by, Tom. Yes, the ghost is pretty much friendly. Enjoy the remainder of your day, Sara

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/5/2023 5:37:00 AM

I like it. I do love September and it’s ghosts. The beginning of possibilities as We shift to a new season.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/5/2023 7:52:00 AM

Thanks, Richard, for the read. I, too, enjoy September almost as much as I enjoy May and June. The shifting of the seasons gives me the feeling of a new beginning. Have a great day, Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/5/2023 5:00:00 AM

- September ... beautiful goodbye to summer ... lovely haiku, Sara :) - hugs

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/5/2023 7:51:00 AM

thank you, Anne. I appreciate your stopping by. hugs and blessings to you as well. Sara