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Sending Out

Dreams need heads to occupy As floats buoy up the non swimmers It's all a sea, we're all in it And we wake up on the sand Missing a bit of the journey Right there, in salvation - we dream on Until the next time We open our eyes

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Date: 3/2/2024 9:11:00 AM
A dream within a dream Dilly, one surreal, one aspiringly real, which in reality possibly makes both unreal, but a respite nonetheless, I do like the complex nature of your mind, cheers David
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Date: 3/2/2024 9:40:00 AM
What a great comment, thank you!

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