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* For the lost souls of Aokigahara * ~ jade canopy waving while it whispers the lush secret, compelled delicious word of myriad words casting shadowed merriment at a woven briar carpet colored strings, winding... waiting tangled labyrinth, so deep and dark that dew still clings at mid-day, leafy tresses tickling azure, sopping sun like thirst - bright and warm above straight trunks like steady soldiers fingery tendrils burrow deep to find purchase - ruddy earth, cool as rime, rich with rooty rot - nature's marrow to breathe the branches Fuji's frilly garden skirt listen, tender... soft now, the hush of mys'tries - this forest bides all, yet stars still glisten its black heart - desire, a mossy coat ... dour... waiting hear the voice, low, the breath of breaths, murmuring - it begs, come... in a thousand gentle lullabies, with the language of the ages and the ends - voice sweet as death it calls to the misty meandering, one dire dalliance - grandest adventure of all - the dazzling dream that never wakes.

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Date: 12/31/2021 10:48:00 AM
What a beautiful poem you wrote for the troubled souls who entered this very frightening forest.
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Date: 12/31/2021 1:08:00 AM
Breath-taking imagery in a beauty of a poem, Greg, congratulations:)
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Date: 12/31/2021 12:02:00 AM
A great and beautiful work full of imagery. Congratulations!
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Date: 12/30/2021 9:42:00 AM
Greg, congratulations on your win! This poem is as rich in "dazzling" images as rich loam that births life. Sending you blessings and joy for 2022.
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Date: 12/21/2021 8:26:00 AM
WOW!!! What an amazing write. A great picture to go with your write.  Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................
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Date: 11/23/2021 6:38:00 PM
I agree fully with my good friend, Regina's breathless, creative and inspirational comment on this exceptional piece my friend! Flows with such depths and imagery, as if a cool breeze on a steamy hot day. A fav... God bless...
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Date: 11/16/2021 6:35:00 AM
Beautiful... a breath of light, colored by insight, musical and breathless - and oh, so creative. Whispers inspiration... God bless you my friend. Love, Gina
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