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Scream Short

Point of no return Fate sealed as the line is crossed Subsumed by nightmare

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 3/6/2023 12:28:00 PM
Great haiku, full of meaning, awaiting interpretation. Thinking about it, love it.
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Date: 3/6/2023 12:45:00 PM
Oh and thank you so much for your kind words, it's lovely to know I've written something that reaches the bar :)
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Date: 3/6/2023 12:44:00 PM
There was a lot of directions to go in for this one and I did a lot of playing around with the words (trying to take a leaf out of your book!). I think these are the essence, for me at least.

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