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August days demise September horizon dawns Winterland gateway

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Charmaine Chircop

Date: 8/21/2023 7:25:00 PM

Sweet

Arlo Parker
Date: 8/22/2023 11:48:00 AM

Appreciated. :o]

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/15/2023 9:10:00 AM

- July was full of rain ... August had hope ... September around the bend ... and winter awaits with snow and cold dark days ... time flies, Arlo - Great haiku :) -

Arlo Parker
Date: 8/16/2023 12:32:00 AM

Bundle well...thx, AL. :o]

Jan Allison

Date: 8/7/2023 11:41:00 AM

sweet haiku AP, Personally, I love the transition from summer to autumn but not from autumn to winter and possible cold days. hugs Jan xx

Arlo Parker
Date: 8/7/2023 12:54:00 PM

Many folk love the Fall. Transition is dramatic. Winter can wait... :o)

Paul Bell

Date: 8/7/2023 11:30:00 AM

Is that snow I see yonder.

Paul Bell
Date: 8/8/2023 3:05:00 AM

North pole.

Arlo Parker
Date: 8/7/2023 12:53:00 PM

Depends on where you live, :o)