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Ripples of Her Charm

I follow the beat of your soft walk, wanting to curl around a curve of hips that sways in its innocent tenderness like a flame of wonderment on my mind. The sunset's ledge aligns your steps While I in a haze needs to touch your revelry. And how the air flows in fluid strokes within your world strolling on meadow's light. Come, spin me a dainty moonlit charm weaving tapestry of a mellow song; while the ripple of your twirled dips awaits a symphony of a lifetime. We may incline as one wavelet where all moments strum night's wands through interludes of harmony, If only your breath will let me in. ~ Mood Music with Original Details Contest

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Date: 2/26/2014 9:26:00 PM
Jajosh, thank you for setting the music and the mood with your winning. Poem. Congratulations:) Take Care ~SKAT~
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Date: 2/25/2014 9:38:00 AM
this one sings, J.. seems you are on a winning streak.. sweert congrats.. huggs
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Date: 2/24/2014 3:53:00 AM
Enjoyed your write on mood music and congrats on the win,jajosh
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Date: 2/24/2014 12:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Jajosh--this was a really tough batch to judge, all so well written. I appreciated yours for your musicality and sense of mood. Thanks for entering my contest.
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