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RIP Virginity

Dear Sir, my innocence is gone now, no more fear Do you love to **** me again, I am always here. I wonder when you taught me how to use a pen, I was so into you but my ****** was in pain! I was crying; I was too immature to understand I was turning only 13, I couldn't feel what happened. but I promise I never forget what you taught me at the end. I begged you to stop and looked into your eyes, there was a reflection of a cruel world, that’s what I deserved! Don't be afraid, mommy never knows what you did, Nobody knows that you made me bleed. Dear sir, my innocence is gone with all my tears, as I had no safe place to hide myself from fears. Nobody saw anything as your world was so blind! having hidden hatred inside, a virgin died. Dear sir, time cannot erase your memories, time doesn't heal all wounds, that you marked, yes, you took my innocence that will be always on my mind. My innocent world was shattered by your touch Hope no one ever has to experience such For all the pain, all the cruelty, thank you very much!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/10/2015 4:51:00 PM
to have it taken and not given....a foul deed so very forbidden....the perpetrator will get whats coming....I promise for him hell will be really something....
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Date: 7/20/2015 11:50:00 AM
Well-penned with honest and self-immolating vividness...7++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++!!!!
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Date: 6/30/2015 11:16:00 PM
nice to see this one a winning list again
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Date: 6/29/2015 8:43:00 PM
Deeply sad topic, good write. Well done. Viv x
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Date: 5/14/2015 5:50:00 PM
Farhana, Congrats on the nice win. SKAT love
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Date: 5/10/2015 8:39:00 PM
Farhana.. Congrats on your win!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 5/11/2015 4:35:00 PM
It was a computer glitch Dave the poem was not moved on to rounds 2 and 3 and shoudl never have appeared on the winners list - I have soup mailed both the writer and soup to let them know:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/21/2015 12:01:00 PM
such a lost soul....this one who couldn't even understand the pleasantry of 'just', the virgin's silhouette ! Bravo with this write dear poet ! Have a blessed day....much love, james
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Date: 12/26/2014 11:12:00 PM
FARHANA, CONGRATULATIONS ... this is a nice sweet little HM... hugs.. Linda
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Date: 12/24/2014 10:30:00 AM
Very personal, very tragic--hope it's not true. A nice write.
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Date: 11/23/2014 3:21:00 PM
Dear Farhana, First of all I want to congratulate you for your win. I was just speechless when I read your poem. It was just breathtaking and I want to congratulate you for the courage you show by writing about some ugly truth of the society.
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Date: 10/16/2014 8:24:00 PM
very vivid telling of a traumatic event...
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Date: 8/29/2014 5:26:00 PM
You do a sterling job of describing what sexual violence does to a girl/woman. Some men will never understand; they are the embodiment of beyond-the-pale selfishness. They know nothing about love.
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Date: 8/29/2014 7:06:00 AM
Visiting again to congratulate you,
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Date: 8/28/2014 12:26:00 PM
many congrats on your win in the slam contest:-) hugs Jan x
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Date: 8/28/2014 11:32:00 AM
Farhana, Congratulation, on your awesome win. Thanks for the support. Loving ~SKAT~
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Date: 7/20/2014 10:07:00 PM
Time is of essence and knowledge brings wisdom... A well written life-story... Hugs Verlena
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Date: 7/20/2014 10:06:00 PM
Time is of essence and knowledge brings wisdom... A well written life-story... Hugs Verlena
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Date: 7/20/2014 10:05:00 PM
Time is of essence and knowledge brings wisdom... A well written life-story... Hugs Verlena
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Date: 7/8/2014 4:58:00 PM
Something so cherished and then lost to another's lust...it's sad. This poem does what is intended; the feelings invoked are intense. A very great write, dear Farhana. Lots of love and understanding...:(
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Date: 6/29/2014 9:45:00 AM
went back and read this and appreciate your raw honesty, Sometimes these type poems are the best to write bc they help get out the ugly stuff in life. kinda therapeutic ya know? Keep on Writin'! People have really taken a liking to your poetry. GOOD STUFF!~JSL
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Date: 6/28/2014 2:40:00 PM
nice
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Date: 6/26/2014 11:13:00 AM
Dear Farhana, I'm sending you a Soup Mail. Love, Carolyn
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Farhana Akter
Date: 6/27/2014 12:49:00 AM
Thanks dear
Date: 6/19/2014 4:16:00 PM
Congrats.Sara
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Date: 6/18/2014 8:13:00 PM
Farhana.. Congratulations on your win with such a personal tragic subject.. hugs to you sweetie.. Arlene
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Date: 6/18/2014 1:56:00 PM
Hi Farhana...congratulations on your win, but most of all for the courage you show by writing this strong poem addressed to horrible "Sir". Hope time will heal the memories and the hurt. // paul
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