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dreams ride on moonrise hung from that silver being as dreams always do

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Date: 9/10/2023 6:01:00 PM
So much depth of spirit and soul dear Sara. Loved it ! Hugs, Susan :)
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/11/2023 3:49:00 AM
thanks, Susan, for stopping by. Thank you for your wonderful compliment as well. Enjoy your day, Sara
Date: 9/9/2023 5:33:00 PM
What else can I say, it's poetry in motions, Sara. You're a genius at matching photos with poetic words. Thanks for sharing your gift of writing with us here at Poetry Soup. Hugs, Bill
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/11/2023 3:48:00 AM
thank you for stopping by, dear hubby. Poetry in motion? Wow! What a great compliment. Du bist der Beste! hugs back, me :-)
Date: 9/9/2023 1:29:00 PM
Another wonderful poem from you dear Sara. So, so well written. I agree with Hiya, you have this tremendous ability to write a few lines and yet convey so much in such a truly beautiful, profound way. Poetry at its highest. Loved it! Thank you for sharing. Blessings to you.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/11/2023 3:47:00 AM
thank you, Christina, for your beautiful comments. I appreciate your compliments and thoughtfulness. Have a blessed day, Sara
Date: 9/9/2023 6:37:00 AM
Your writes always elevate my soul to a higher dimension of soulful depth and heartfelt symphonies.. Gosh, how much convey within such few words, this definitely blows my mind away! "Dreams ride on moonrise" Oh, they definitely do and so magically in your poetic world! Dear Sara, you've become one of my favs here definitely, "hung from that silver being" Oh so evocative.. I'm a moonlit soul and I truly love this haiku, so elegant! :)
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/9/2023 7:47:00 AM
thank you, Hiya, for stopping by. You give me such wonderful feedback and validation. I so appreciate you. I, too, am glad we connected via PS. In some ways, perhaps we are moonlit kindred spirts. I, too, love the moon and especially the moonrise...a magical part of the day. Enjoy your weekend, Sara
Date: 9/9/2023 5:04:00 AM
As beautiful as moonrise, Sara. In just a few words you painted a lovely dream-- a portrait on skies.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/9/2023 7:44:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay, for stopping by. I appreciate your comments. I love the words, 'portrait in the sky.' Enjoy your day, Sara
Date: 9/9/2023 5:03:00 AM
Wow i love this haiku beautiful queen of haikus, as always such a dreamy and profound write. Especially “ dreams ride on moonrise” as a moonlover I can’t get over that line, so imaginative and magical. Made my soul warm
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/9/2023 7:43:00 AM
thank you, 'ink' for reading my haiku and for your thoughtful comments. I'm a moon lover as well, especially the moonrise...seeing one does add magic to my days. Have a wonderful day, Sara

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