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Respond with Abandon

Time stopped for five seconds But there was an eternity of thoughts I feel… your lips, the taste This body intricately curved to fit the hardness of mine Time resumed and I responded with abandon Gripping the back of your neck I want your every breath Savouring the slippery softness of this tongue You tremble beneath this touch It excites me No more worries or thoughts Just uninhibited bliss Closed door pulled drapes Now come…. I desire your desire to be desired

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Date: 6/8/2018 9:31:00 PM
A big Wow! Sean, this is hot and passionate with such a sexy last line. A thrilling poem! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 6/14/2021 3:39:00 PM
Oh Susan! it been ages. Im back! Thank you..