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a mile-high sunset reminds me how small I am keeps ego humble

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Brian Sambourne

Date: 9/27/2023 7:59:00 PM

Superb! We are indeed small creatures in the vastness of this great universe. Now if we only could all get along. All the best, Brian

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/27/2023 7:32:00 AM

Sara, thank you for crafting such a beautiful and captivating piece. Your words have ignited a deep sense of touch and inspiration within me. This poem resonates with me on a profound level, much like the vast expanse of the sky that never fails to captivate my gaze. Its ever-changing hues and infinite depths compel me to continuously look upward, unable to tear my eyes away from its mesmerizing beauty.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/27/2023 8:16:00 AM

Wow, Sotto, your response to my poem has brought me joy this morning. I'm glad the poem resonated with you on a deep level. You're right, the vast sky (whether morning or night) compels me to look upward literally and figuratively. Mesmerizing for sure. Have a blessed day, Sara

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 9/26/2023 8:33:00 PM

I like this very much! The sky often makes me feel that way, I can’t stop looking up. xomo

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/27/2023 3:47:00 AM

thanks for stopping by, Maureen and for commenting on my Haiku. Sometimes the sky is just captivating. Enjoy your day, Sara

Bill Baker

Date: 9/26/2023 5:20:00 PM

Thanks for sharing the beautiful image to support your fine Haiku, Sara. A FAV even though I can't FAV your poems. A great reminder, my truelove. Hugs, Bill

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/27/2023 3:46:00 AM

thank you, hubby, for stopping by...I thought the image was oustanding and perfect match for poem. hugs, me

Yann Rolland

Date: 9/26/2023 4:03:00 PM

just touching and inspiring, thanks poet Sara

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/26/2023 4:08:00 PM

Thank, Yann, for stopping by and for commenting on my Haiku. Have a wonderful evening, Sara

Deb M

Date: 9/26/2023 2:52:00 PM

Oh Sara…..just Lovely! Debx

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/26/2023 3:09:00 PM

Thank you, Ms. Deb! I appreciate you stopping by...and enjoy your evening, Sara