Reflection

It's a blotched pass For the glass to Go back one time.

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Anonomus Scorpio

Date: 11/12/2023 1:30:00 PM

If only mirrors squelched, second guesses, as easily as they give second looks... you do mesmerize me little one :) A.S.

Paige Hind
Date: 11/12/2023 1:35:00 PM

Not that little, lol. :) But thanks for commenting and reading me!

Silent One

Date: 11/8/2023 7:44:00 PM

Nice one..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/7/2023 1:32:00 PM

I think the third line needs a word with S sound on the end, but I really like your little poem

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/9/2023 1:11:00 PM

ok, thanks. I can get it

Paige Hind
Date: 11/8/2023 7:07:00 PM

Thank you- it would be very nice like that, but my poem would read a little differently. I appreciate your comments and help. Please read the comments here to understand what I meant; perhaps it was difficult, lol. <3

Ink Empress

Date: 11/7/2023 7:24:00 AM

Oh you did this form! So seamless! And so intriguing how you’ve described and delivered reflection, made me read it few times and think in so many levels! You’ve nailed it! Is this for the contest?

Paige Hind
Date: 11/8/2023 6:23:00 PM

Hey lovely friend! Well, no... I just wanted to try this form; it's the very first time I ever did it. Thanks for your interest in it. :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/7/2023 6:38:00 AM

Is this an hourglass? Cool poetry, Paige!

Paige Hind
Date: 11/8/2023 6:26:00 PM

Hey- it's partially about going to see your reflection for than once., or it's just a blotched pass- like romantically when someone is not interested truly in someone else and cannot see themself anymore... but this is a reflection that I did in metaphor. :)

Yann Rolland

Date: 11/7/2023 5:29:00 AM

so nice, made me think to Marcel Proust ( la recherche du passé), thanks for sharing nicely, yann

Mat Ignacio

Date: 11/6/2023 7:55:00 PM

nice when said aloud

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/6/2023 4:14:00 PM

A nicely penned Than-Bauk, Hind. Enjoyed reading this. Blessing

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/6/2023 3:09:00 PM

a nicely done Than-Bauk. Nice to see folks try this form...not sure it's a match for me but admire those who can write in such a manner. Have a great evening, Sara