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Random Thoughts

When random thoughts are bombarding a mind, Cohesiveness among them is hard to find. Metaphors and symbols just like in one’s dreams, Even what is seen, is not what it seems. One must not resist, just let the thoughts flow. Look for the patterns and see what they show. They show the direction, but rarely the conclusion, There isn’t much reason, just a form of illusion. Give the thoughts time, as they slowly congeal, Attaching to each other, a story they tell. Flow with the words, give them a chance, Let them move together like partners as they dance. Look for the thread, their intertwined relation, Patiently seek their vague explanation. Look for the message the words are revealing. What are the metaphors and symbols concealing? Ask, to what in my life do these things refer? Is their truth in the manner in which they occur? Or is it the way the thoughts make one feel? Sometimes combining to create an ordeal.

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 2/3/2022 1:47:00 PM

your poem reminds me of the power of reflection -- likewise, we each must not resist change, the change that comes with reflection

Bill Baker
Date: 2/3/2022 4:30:00 PM

I agree, Sara. Thanks for your comments. Hugs, Bill

Kenneth Cheney

Date: 1/5/2022 9:56:00 AM

To make sense out of what appears random is the gift of wisdom. Your poetry shows you have the gift. Great thoughtfulness at a minimum, but I see wisdom. Thanks for sharing.

Bill Baker
Date: 1/6/2022 6:19:00 AM

Thank you for your kind thoughtfulness, Kenneth. I just try to write from my heart. Write on my friend, Bill

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/17/2021 8:17:00 AM

I have not been able to resist since I picked up my pen after thirty-eight years of not writing "One must not resist, just let the thoughts flow." So I relate well to this one.

Bill Baker
Date: 12/17/2021 1:56:00 PM

I agree, Caren! Let it flow, do not resist. I admire the quality and quantity that flows through you my friend. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/16/2021 9:08:00 AM

It is really great when random thoughts can be brought together to form something awesome, like a POEM!!! Nicely done.

Bill Baker
Date: 12/16/2021 4:08:00 PM

Thank you Andrea. Have a great weekend! :-) Hugs, Bill

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/16/2021 6:33:00 AM

WoW! Bill, I echo what Milt said, you have penned a deep and thought-provoking write. Well done. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Bill Baker
Date: 12/16/2021 6:57:00 AM

Thanks, Alexis. I appreciate the positive feedback. A poet friend, Bill

L Milton Hankins

Date: 12/15/2021 8:00:00 PM

Wow! Very thought-provoking poem filled with good advice! Nice job, Bill.

Bill Baker
Date: 12/16/2021 6:59:00 AM

Thank you Milt, for faithfully reading and commenting on my poetry. I respect your thoughts and comments. Merry Christmas! Bill

Sand Blown

Date: 12/15/2021 7:52:00 PM

....good one....exactly how theoretical sciences/mathematics meet 'reallity'..... stan

Bill Baker
Date: 12/16/2021 7:01:00 AM

Thanks for the visit, Sand Blown I hope you'll return again. Your comments are always welcome. Merry Christmas! Bill

Brandy Nicole

Date: 12/15/2021 7:37:00 PM

(Words) "Let them move together like partners as they dance" Yes, I completely agree. I like the way your *random thoughts* collide. You have created a masterpiece, my dear friend. :) Brandy

Bill Baker
Date: 12/16/2021 7:02:00 AM

Always a joy to hear from my dear Brandy. Nice to hear from you again. Merry Christmas! Bill

Panagiota Romios

Date: 12/15/2021 6:40:00 PM

Excelket one, Bill Panagiota cxx

Bill Baker
Date: 12/16/2021 7:03:00 AM

Thanks for the visit Panagiota, and for the comment. :-) Merry Christmas! Bill

Debra L Brown

Date: 12/15/2021 6:29:00 PM

You are so in tune with your thought, a very nice rhyming poem. Blessings ~ Debra

Bill Baker
Date: 12/16/2021 7:04:00 AM

Thank you Debra. It's always good to see you've made a visit. Merry Christmas! Bill

Valsa George

Date: 12/15/2021 5:40:00 PM

Every minute, umpteen thoughts course through our mind... If we give them a chance to settle, we may be able to connect them into a pattern and discern what they mean to us. We can also look for the message they impart. A beautifully rhyming poem with great thoughts, Bill.

Bill Baker
Date: 12/15/2021 5:45:00 PM

Thank you, Valsa. Happy Holiday! Bill