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hatchings give impression of shade closer still and there are irregularities mesh always to get caught in watching seasons change wanting not escape, but release yet careful viewing shows no gaps the only space is the vantage point to steadily cover canvas with paint and scars edge to edge I scour forwards and back eye ravenous for a difference until I've absorbed all the colour all that's left then is to be weary staring out letting the moment go uncaptured.

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Date: 7/29/2024 1:41:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. I also enjoy the paintings of Van Gogh. Have a blessed week writing away....................
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Date: 7/29/2024 1:44:00 PM
Thank you Paula! It was interesting to read about how many paintings were done from this window - there's always emotion captured I think x

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