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Rain (The One)

Thy living water a infinite gift , divine cleansing all to pure.... symbolism of the One , a life of spirit , a thought , a word , a downpour

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Skat A

Date: 5/23/2015 11:57:00 AM

once again stunning

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/1/2010 7:20:00 PM

Rick, I am trying to see what kind of haiku you preer, traditional style or the other. This is really nice symbolism. I think you are more a traditional person but your rules say "traditional accepted" which could be interpreted two ways. "also accepted" or "only accepted" I think I will play it safe and use "only traditional" since yours seem that way! LUv, Andrea

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 5/22/2010 9:45:00 AM

So amazingly true, Rick :) And it's so comforting that this living water is there for all of us! Thanks for the honor of being in your winner's list Rick :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/20/2010 7:25:00 AM

Well had u been able to enter your own contest this definitely would be number one for sure..no doubt in my mind.. HIS living water is awesome.. thankxxx so much Rick for choosing my "Moisture Manna" as your 6th place winner in the "Rain" contest.. it was my honor to receive it and a joy to write for it... already entered your "Spiritual Message" contest today and this is another great chance to stir the creative jucies on the spiritual side of life.. hope all got resolved with Soup and points..

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 5/20/2010 3:14:00 AM

Rick, I like your analogy...Christlike. Smiles, Dane Ann

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/19/2010 7:50:00 PM

Nicely done, Rick. You could have won your own contest!