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Walking is my most beloved way of waking, to stride out each dawn taking in nature’s sights and sounds. The path of stone awaits me each morning, rising ahead in rugged perfection, the light playing over the grey as if it were the fingers of a pianist upon gentle keys. Nature welcomes me and enters my lungs, giving me a deeper sense of connection and wonder. The woodlands is a place where I rest old thoughts and gain new perspectives. My footfalls become my heartbeat, and my sight becomes a form of wakeful dreaming. I can see clearly, not with my eyes but with my senses—a type of thinking without words. It’s as if the sights, colors, sounds, and smells are a million weaved moments both transient and real. What comes to me are new thoughts, a sort of poetry I never realized I was capable of. Walking isn’t about the destination; it’s about the traveling, the seeing, and the seeking. The soles of my shoes are well-traveled, born to embrace each onward path seeing new views and seeking new horizons—horizons others only frequently gaze upon. I gaze up ahead. The sky above me is ever blue; schools of puffy white clouds form overhead.
the clouds are soft puffs on magical field of blue the Artist's canvas clouds grace the blue sky heavenly shapes and sizes vapor and movement puffy clouds pass by silently carry my past to another time watching a white cloud conversing with God out loud tranquility found

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Date: 11/9/2023 11:44:00 PM
This is beautiful Sara. I am pleased to meet your poetry! I read your husband's poem about you and came over to read about the sweet lady he wrote about. I love your poem. Your walk along the path of this beautiful earth, as well as spiritually with your Lord, conversing with the Creator. It painted a lovely picture so very precious. ~BJ
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/10/2023 4:38:00 AM
ahhh, thank you, BJ....nice to meet you. I appreciate your visit and your kind words about my poem. I'll follow you and read some of your poems later today. Have a blessed day, Sara
Date: 11/9/2023 1:46:00 PM
What a lovely/pretty~write/picture. I really enjoyed reading this one. Have a great fall day writing away............
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/9/2023 2:09:00 PM
thanks for your visit, Paula. I appreciate your ongoing support, Sara
Date: 11/9/2023 9:20:00 AM
Dear SARA, Your mastery of the art of Haiku is truly exemplary. The way you intricately weave together vivid descriptions, eloquent metaphors, and stunning imagery is nothing short of remarkable. Your work has a profound effect, awakening the depths of the spirit. As poets, we have the unique ability to merge our observations with the vibrant hues of our emotions, creating a poetic tapestry unlike any other.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/9/2023 2:11:00 PM
kind Sotto--I'm humbly grateful for your observations about what I weave together in my poetry. I wanted to write something spiritual; from your comments, I think I did. :-) I agree with your wise words about the unique ability poets have....they see the world differently and bravely task themselves with conveying what they observe. Well said, sir.
Date: 11/9/2023 6:36:00 AM
"I can see clearly, not with my eyes but with my senses—a type of thinking without words" - A beautiful haibun with a grand haiku chain.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/9/2023 2:12:00 PM
thank you for your visit and for your kind words. I hope all is going well with your publishing endeavors, Sara
Date: 11/9/2023 5:01:00 AM
Your Haibun led me to follow you on your morning walk, Sara. I saw every detail of it through your eyes and your expressive imagery. Your talent at writing Haiku is exceptionally skillful.
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Date: 11/9/2023 2:33:00 PM
thanks for accompanying me on my walk. Always grateful to have someone with me. Thanks for your kind words about my Haiku-writing ability. Have a good day, Sara
Date: 11/9/2023 4:44:00 AM
Wow clouds never looked beautiful ever, the way you’ve painted imagery and written about how nature touches senses and is healing and sort of an awakening is beyond creative and artistic! Truly you are the queen of haibun! I always love watching clouds move, sometimes especially when everything gets overwhelming, i swim, and float and just sky gaze, i really love the lines “ the fingers of a pianist upon gentle keys“ ah so gorgeous! “ schools of puffy white clouds” such impeccable wordplay! Fave
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Date: 11/9/2023 2:35:00 PM
ahh, thank you, kind Ink. I see we share a love of cloud watching. I find it calming when I get overwhelmed and overly stressed. I used to run; now I walk and gaze up at the sky, sometimes stopping for long periods of time. I'm grateful you appreciate my word play and imagery, signed "The Haiku Queen" :-) smile, Sara
Date: 11/9/2023 4:18:00 AM
Wow, dear Sara, this haibun elevated me to a dimension of mystical enchantment and made me soul stroll in the wonderlands of thoughts! The way you've described walking and its unique fragrances with experience & journey.. Ahh, it's a divine waking up of the spirit. For us poets, what we see , we blend it with the colours of our emotions and streak unique hues from the poetical palette.. This piece is a true work of art as evident from the haiku chain as well.. Absolutely enjoyed reading this wow
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Date: 11/9/2023 4:25:00 AM
ahh, beautiful soul, your words lifted me this morning. I'm grateful for you and your complimentary and supportive words. I love how you poetically described what poets (writers) do--the blending of colors and hue-filled words to express our emotions. You're a truly special person who sees life so poetically. Grateful for you. Have a splendid day, Sara

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