Polar Wind

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bitter fierce morning spider web bunting graces ~ bleak artic school run

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Brian Sambourne

Date: 1/11/2022 6:51:00 AM

You've caught the cold creatively in this fine Haiku. We're shivering in minus 19 Celsius this morning in Canada. Your posting seems to embrace our Arctic cold. Ah January! Be well. Stay warm. Brian

Joanna Feltham
Date: 1/12/2022 10:37:00 PM

Wow that is cold! We have had a mild winter this year in the UK, which is slightly unusual, but there is still time for things to change. Thank you for your comment.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/30/2021 9:00:00 AM

You say more in 11 words than most of us say in 11 verses. WOW!

Joanna Feltham
Date: 10/30/2021 11:06:00 AM

Thank you. Your comments mean alot, you're a very talented writer. :-)

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 8/4/2021 6:03:00 AM

Reminded me of my school days. We used to bend a soft twig to make a circle then hook it under the early morning webs until it was like a mirror with the dew. Of course, we would run screaming if we saw a spider. Still that was part of the fun....nice haiku Joanna....Delice

Joanna Feltham
Date: 8/4/2021 7:30:00 AM

I absoultely love spiderwebs, covered in frost or raindrops on a cold morning. I'm not a fan of spiders either. We had some huge ones in our shed. Thank you for reading my haiku, and for your comment.