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Poison

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Poisoned game-changer, tainted mouths drip danger. Mind is paranoia-spiked: price of being liked.

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Speaks Volumes

Date: 5/15/2025 11:26:00 AM

Even bare-foot, you write wonderful poetry!

I Am Anaya

Date: 5/13/2025 9:22:00 AM

I tryst not to read too deeply, unless the shoe fits! 15 lines, great piece~

I Am Anaya
Date: 5/13/2025 10:59:00 AM

Ty! ;)

Di11y Da11y
Date: 5/13/2025 10:57:00 AM

Ok no worries. Enjoy the burst of inspiration x

I Am Anaya
Date: 5/13/2025 10:54:00 AM

I meant me! Lol me too, been poping 'em out like hotcakes~ be kind, life is beautiful xhugs

Di11y Da11y
Date: 5/13/2025 9:36:00 AM

It's just a rhyming poem Anaya written in 5 seconds flat on the theme of poison because it was the contest prompt. I have no shoes on, I'm in a hammock minding my own business.

Lioness Onpaper

Date: 5/13/2025 7:12:00 AM

Oh wow … lovely internal rhymes.. paranoia do be spiking !!!

Di11y Da11y
Date: 5/13/2025 7:48:00 AM

Haha thank you! Let the rhymes lead the poem and it went a bit dark :)