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Pine Needle Story Poem

I'm a little pine needle, spinning in the breeze My life was so predictable before, now I'm ill at ease Falling from a great height, into who knows where I just don't know if I'll like it down there I'm conscious of my path, I tumble and I twirl I resolve to be my best and give new life a whirl Things come into focus, there's dance and a display Riding the wind with pals, creating patterns all day This phase of life plays to my dreams It's where I was meant to be it seems Creating beauty for those who choose to see For every twist and turn I'm now completely free

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Date: 7/25/2023 1:39:00 AM
A unique character for a story, DD, congratulations:)
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Date: 7/25/2023 1:42:00 AM
Thanks Jo
Date: 7/3/2023 9:52:00 AM
The imagery is very catching.
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Di11y Da11y
Date: 7/3/2023 9:58:00 AM
Thank you - I met the pine needle yesterday, it must have whispered to me on the way past my ear :)

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