Perfect

a righteous harvest two seeds nurtured in Gods light bountiful love flow entangled beauty our souls drift free, pure, untouched loving songs echo ecstasy takes flight above graceful perfection painted together complete a moment sacred and free happiness surrounds Contest Haiku~Tanka~Haiku

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Skat A

Date: 5/23/2015 11:36:00 AM

yes that is the sound of perfect

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/21/2010 5:25:00 AM

Congratulations Rick on your win in Linda-Marie's contest "Harvest Of Happiness". Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/20/2010 11:30:00 PM

congratulations, rick, it "sounds" perfect too. LUv, Andrea

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/20/2010 11:53:00 AM

wonderful , congrats on your win in the contest

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/19/2010 4:41:00 AM

Congratulations on this win in the contest, Rick

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/19/2010 12:48:00 AM

Congrats Rick on your success in my Harvest of Happiness contest.. a wonderful piece .. appreciate your constant support ..with luv..always..

Audrey Haick

Date: 9/17/2010 10:38:00 AM

This is a beaut! I can feel the serenity in this, Rick..and may I thank you for placing my poem in your contest! I enjoyed writing it too. Peace, love, Audrey

Anna-Marie Docherty

Date: 9/15/2010 11:37:00 PM

Mmmm... Nicely worded Haiku Tanka chain - effectively painted and mastered to create a dream come true... Well done, keep that talented pen dancing! Kindest thoughts, Anna-Marie.

Brittany Andrews

Date: 9/11/2010 9:45:00 PM

you would defently win.. come check out my poems sometime and check if there any good as yours. :) love angel4eva23

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/11/2010 6:18:00 PM

Nice haiku well penned with nice images, Rick

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/11/2010 1:41:00 PM

thankxxx for supporting my new contest Rick .. and good luck with your super entry..luv..

Constance La France

Date: 9/11/2010 12:49:00 PM

This is so pretty, Rick, a winner for sure.. love constance

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/10/2010 4:39:00 PM

beautiful entry Rick, good luck in the contest

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 9/10/2010 4:39:00 PM

great write Rick, very ejoyed!! Michael

Diane Locksley

Date: 9/10/2010 4:23:00 PM

When two people are joined together in love, that is true bliss. Very nice entry for the contest. Gee, so many contests going on here. I just wrote one for the "Sphinx head on Mars?" contest and here's another new one. Good luck with your entry!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/10/2010 4:02:00 PM

nice one, enjoyed your write, wish you the best on the contest..P.D.