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Pebbles and Beaches

If you were a pebble picked up by me from the beach, I would have kept you close to my heart, And never let you out of sore sight and rational reach, Protected you from every sloven screech. I would have touched every scar, Kissed your throat that swallows stars. Even if it meant gibbeting my heart. Shadowy, shallow sheaves of your shedding sentiments, Let me touch the twinging, trembling tips of your hands, And foster love into your heart's barren lands. Velvety vitality of your giggles flows as a river, Under the bridges of my consciousness. Chilling and captivating, it tingles on my neck, A blooming shiver. Be of some use, My mortal muse, Let me capture you in my poetry, So that I can love you for eternity. I can't promise you the world; All I have is love, a melody of a bird.

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Date: 5/26/2025 3:07:00 PM
Anne, what a tender and romantic declaration of compassionate love. It is touching and full of your heart. So glad I found it today! Blessings to you!
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Anne Winter
Date: 5/26/2025 7:40:00 PM
Dear Sam, thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked the poem! Best, Anne
Date: 5/26/2025 5:56:00 AM
This is gorgeous, absolutely. I loved reading it and the reveal at the end is priceless, so creative. Being me, I have to be me; so, not to take anything away from your more than capable pen, I share that I'm itching to reach in and tweak the first line. To me, this is, otherwise, perfection. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 5/26/2025 7:39:00 PM
Dear CayCay, thank you so much, I appreciate your note and I've made an improvement in the first line. Thanks for making me notice that. You're very kind and I truly am grateful for your lovely notes! My heart is feeling truly happy after reading your notes. Warmly, Anne
Date: 5/24/2025 12:47:00 AM
Beautiful poetry!
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Anne Winter
Date: 5/24/2025 12:59:00 AM
Thank you so much :)
Date: 5/23/2025 8:07:00 AM
Dearest Anne, I came to watch your dance, like waves upon the shore, each line a treasure I cherish. You are the pebble that brightens a reader's life, a unique gem shaped by experience. I admire your strength, your vulnerability, and the beauty you bring into every moment here at PS. Know that I want to always be a safe harbor for you, and I’ll celebrate your essence in every verse. Spring Blessings, Dearest Anne, Daniel
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Anne Winter
Date: 5/24/2025 12:55:00 AM
Dearest Daniel, I'm deeply touched by your beautiful note and I feel seen and appreciated. You are a true friend, My Dearest Daniel. How lucky I am to have you as a friend, I truly appreciate you! It's like I have known you for ages. I'm beyond grateful! With love and respect always, Anne
Date: 5/21/2025 7:41:00 PM
I enjoyed the alliteration, Anne, lovely title and poetry! xhugs
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Anne Winter
Date: 5/22/2025 6:51:00 AM
Dear Anaya, I'm glad you enjoyed the poem! Thank you! Best, Anne
Date: 5/21/2025 10:12:00 AM
Your compassion and eloquence shine through. These are your qualities to cherish and hold dear. Never let others tamper with them. A poignant heartfelt write. My Best
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Anne Winter
Date: 5/22/2025 6:50:00 AM
Dear Robert, your kind words and encouragement mean a lot to me. I truly appreciate your note. Thank you so much! Best, Anne
Date: 5/21/2025 7:06:00 AM
Awwn this made me go awwn! How loving and passionate dear anne, i love the way your words flow and also i must highlight how exquisite and creative your use of alliterations, assonance and also the word pairing is! Beyond brilliant! And the ending! Thats exactly how it is when a poet falls in love! Melody of bird woven for love, for eternity! Pleasure reading you today! Sending you light always! A fave this is for me
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Anne Winter
Date: 5/22/2025 6:45:00 AM
Dear I E, I'm always happy to see your lovely notes. Your notes are always heart touching, I'm beyond grateful! I'm actually smiling as I'm replying to you. Thank you for your lovely note, I truly appreciate you! Best, Anne
Date: 5/20/2025 1:03:00 AM
- I love to pick stones on the beach :) - But this is more than a "stone" ... sensual feelings your mouse has captured through loving feelings :) - A wonderful poem to read, Anne :) - hugs
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Anne Winter
Date: 5/20/2025 4:57:00 PM
Dear Anne-Lise, I'm so glad you enjoyed the poem, it's so lovely to read your note. Best, Anne
Date: 5/19/2025 10:49:00 PM
great inspiration, and creativity,wish i would be a pebble right now, enjoyed my reading
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Anne Winter
Date: 5/20/2025 4:55:00 PM
Dear Yann, thank you for your lovely note. It actually made me smile. I'm grateful for your lovely note! Best, Anne

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